The Vernal Cogwheel's Tremor

by Eva Suluk

The small brass gear, usually so precise, felt rough against Caspian’s thumb. A tremor, barely perceptible, ran through its teeth. He wiped it on his oil-stained trousers, leaving a darker smudge. It was a new kind of tremor, not the familiar vibration of an unbalanced flywheel or a misaligned cam. This was… colder. Deeper. Like the city’s very bones were shivering. Spring was meant to thaw the lingering chill, to coax the first fragile green shoots from the mud-caked earth, but the air around them, even now, carried a peculiar metallic tang, a static hum that pressed against his eardrums. He was meant to be excited about the Vernal Cog-Fête, the annual gathering that shook off the winter doldrums, a chance for everyone to showcase their latest mechanical marvels and share spiced cider. But a cold knot tightened in his gut. The thought of all those meticulously crafted clockwork automatons, all those steam-powered amusements, faltering mid-display… it was a potent fear.

He glanced up, catching his reflection in a polished brass plate hanging precariously on a rack. His goggles were pushed up into his unruly brown hair, and tired lines, more pronounced than they ought to be for someone just past twenty, etched themselves around his eyes. Was he the only one who truly saw it? The grinding where there should be smooth rotation, the steam vents spewing in unsettling, almost mournful, patterns. The way the street lamps flickered with an odd, greenish light just at dusk. He sighed, a faint puff of warm air in the cooler workshop. It wouldn’t do to be the resident Cassandra, not when Bea was already so focused on community spirit. But what if it wasn’t just a loose bolt or a worn gasket?

“Alright, you lot, less brooding, more brainstorming!” Bea’s voice cut through the clatter, bright and sharp as newly ground steel. She swept into the main workshop area, her elaborate goggles pushed onto her forehead, a contraption of spring-loaded arms and magnifying lenses bouncing with each step. Her dark curls were already escaping the sensible knot she’d attempted. She carried a steaming mug in one hand, gesturing wildly with the other. “The Vernal Cog-Fête is barely three weeks away! We need ideas! Big, audacious ideas to bring the whole district together. After… well, after everything, people need something to look forward to.”

Juno, perched on a stack of disused steam barrels, cleaned under her fingernails with the tip of a small screwdriver. Her own uniform – sensible, grease-stained overalls – was a stark contrast to Bea’s more flamboyant, though equally practical, attire. “’Everything’ being the last three airships that nearly nosedived into the Grand Canal because someone forgot to calibrate the atmospheric gyros?” she drawled, not looking up. “Or the automated bread factory that started churning out miniature brass cogs instead of sourdough? Perhaps we should just focus on basic functionality before we promise ‘audacious’ entertainment.”

Bea huffed, setting her mug down with a clink on a workbench already crowded with blueprints and half-finished brass components. “Oh, don’t be such a pessimist, Juno! Those were isolated incidents. A few rogue gears, a little atmospheric pressure fluctuation. Nothing a good technician can’t fix.” She shot a pointed look at Caspian, who was now meticulously examining the internal workings of a deactivated automatronic dog, its brass joints stiff with disuse. “Right, Caspian? You’re the city’s brightest young mind. You’ve got to have some grand vision for the Fête.”

Caspian straightened, a faint flush creeping up his neck. “Well, I… I’ve been thinking. About the new power conduits. The ones leading from the subterranean thermal vents. There’s a peculiar resonance, a sort of… feedback loop I can’t quite isolate. It feels almost… sentient. As if the city itself is holding its breath.” He trailed off, aware he sounded a bit mad. Juno snorted, a laugh rumbling in her chest. “Sentient, eh? Maybe it’s just the pipes singing, lad. Happens when the pressure’s too high. Or perhaps you’ve been spending too much time with Sammie and his dusty old tomes.” She winked, nudging him playfully with her boot.

Sammie, who had been quietly polishing a complex astrolabe near the warmth of a constantly hissing boiler, chuckled. His movements were slow, deliberate, each wipe of the cloth an ancient ritual. His spectacles, perched on the end of his nose, glinted in the workshop’s dim light, making his eyes seem distant, full of unspoken histories. “One man’s dusty tome, Juno, is another’s forgotten wisdom. The city has memory, you know. Etched into its very foundations, its deepest gears. And sometimes, in spring, when the earth awakens, those memories stir.”

Bea clapped her hands together, determined to steer the conversation back to the festive. “See? Even Sammie agrees it’s a time of awakening! So, for the Vernal Cog-Fête, how do we make sure everyone feels that? Not just the engineers and mechanics, but the textile workers, the shopkeepers, the children… What about a grand airship parade? Or perhaps a competition for the most elaborately decorated steam-carriage? Something that inspires awe and pride in our ingenuity!”

“Pride in our… sputtering boilers?” Juno muttered under her breath, loud enough for Caspian to catch it. He suppressed a smile, grateful for her dry humour. It grounded him, even when his own thoughts drifted towards the strange and unsettling. He picked up a discarded clockwork bird, its intricate brass feathers dull. It had been one of his earlier, more ambitious projects, designed to sing a complex, shifting melody. Now, it was silent, its spring mechanism seized. It wasn’t old enough to be so irrevocably broken. Nothing should be, not like this.

The Unseen Grinding

“The problem, Bea,” Caspian began slowly, turning the silent bird over in his hands, “isn’t just about ‘fixing’ things. It’s about understanding *why* they’re breaking. The automatons in the marketplace… the ones designed for street sweeping, for delivering parcels… they’ve been malfunctioning with increasing regularity. Not just simple breakdowns. Their internal mechanisms seem… corrupted. As if an unseen hand is deliberately twisting their gears. Or perhaps, something is trying to make them do things they weren’t built for.” He looked at the bird, its glass eyes staring blankly ahead. “This one, for instance. Its primary spring is locked. Irreversibly. But there’s no visible damage, no stripped teeth, no corrosion.”

Juno finally hopped down from her perch, dropping her screwdriver into a pouch at her hip. She walked over, peering at the bird. “Maybe it’s a new kind of metal fatigue? The alloys we’re using are constantly being refined. Perhaps this batch was… sub-par. Happens, Casp. Not everything has to be a grand conspiracy of the ‘unseen hand’.” She said the last words with exaggerated air quotes, then reached out to take the bird. As her fingers brushed the polished brass, a faint spark jumped between them, making her yelp. She snatched her hand back, shaking it.

“Static electricity,” she said quickly, rubbing her fingers. “Dry air. Happens. No need to look like you’ve just seen a phantom, Bea.”

Bea, however, was staring at the automaton, her previous exuberance dimmed. “But it’s… been humid for days. And that bird hasn’t been powered on in months, has it, Caspian?” Her voice had lost some of its confident edge, replaced by a thread of genuine concern. “The market automatons… I heard one of them tried to deliver a load of fresh bread to the sewage treatment plant yesterday. And the steam pipes in the public baths… they’ve been releasing a strange, high-pitched whine that supposedly makes people feel dizzy and disoriented.”

“Exactly!” Caspian felt a surge of relief that someone else was finally taking his concerns seriously. “It’s not just random incidents. There’s a pattern. A growing… interference. And it always seems to intensify around the key power conduits, or near older, unused mechanical constructs. Like the city is being… probed.”

Sammie, who had been listening intently, slowly set down the astrolabe. He picked up a small, intricately carved wooden box from a shelf, running a thumb over its aged surface. “There are rhythms to a city, young ones. Especially one built upon older foundations, upon earth that remembers a different kind of power. We harness steam, cog, and piston, but the ground beneath us… it sometimes has its own song. And when that song is disturbed, or when it tries to sing too loudly, our modern marvels, they often chafe against it.”


“You’re talking about… what? Earth spirits?” Juno scoffed, though the spark from earlier had clearly rattled her. She crossed her arms, trying to project her usual unflappable demeanour. “Sammie, with all due respect, this isn’t some ancient fable. This is the Age of Steam. We have engineers, not shamans.”

“And sometimes, the engineers are too busy looking forward to notice what’s stirring beneath their feet,” Sammie replied calmly, opening the wooden box. Inside, nestled on velvet, lay a single, petrified fern, its delicate fronds preserved perfectly in stone. It glowed with a faint, internal luminescence that pulsed faintly, almost imperceptibly. “Before the great engines, before the smoke stacks pierced the sky, there was a different kind of energy here. Raw, wild. And it wasn’t always… compatible with our neat, orderly systems. Especially around the Vernal Equinox, when the old energies are said to be at their strongest, preparing the land for new growth.”

Caspian felt a chill that had nothing to do with the damp spring air. The strange glow from the fern seemed to resonate with the peculiar green flicker he’d seen in the streetlights. “So you think… these malfunctions… they’re not just mechanical failures? They’re… symptoms? Of something else?” His mind raced, connecting the dots of strange occurrences. The inexplicable power surges that fried circuits, the phantom voices some had reported through the city’s communication tubes, the unnerving way the large central clock tower had, for a brief, horrifying moment, ticked *backwards*.

Bea, her face pale, picked at a loose thread on her sleeve. “But what does this have to do with the Fête? We’re trying to build community, to bring people together, not… to stir up ancient spirits! Surely, if something truly supernatural were at play, it would be… more obvious. More dramatic.”

“Sometimes, the most profound changes begin with the smallest tremors,” Sammie said, closing the box with a soft click. The faint light vanished, leaving only the workshop’s ambient glow. “A single faulty cog can seize an entire engine. A single unheard whisper can grow into a roar. The Fête… it’s a concentration of our city’s energy, its collective spirit. Perhaps it’s a beacon. Or a lightning rod. Whatever this ‘something’ is, it seems to be reacting to us. To our mechanisms. To our very presence.”

Just as he finished speaking, the automatronic dog Caspian had been examining suddenly jolted. Its brass joints creaked, a loud, grinding sound echoing through the workshop. A faint, greenish-blue light pulsed from within its hollow chest, brighter and more intense than the fern’s earlier glow. The workshop lights flickered violently, plunging them into momentary darkness before sputtering back to life. The hum of the boiler deepened into a low growl, and a thin, metallic whine emanated from the city outside, seemingly coming from everywhere and nowhere all at once. The dog, rigid and unmoving for months, began to slowly, excruciatingly, turn its head towards them, its glass eyes now glowing with the same eerie, pulsating light. Its jaw creaked open, and from its rusted vocalisation unit, a sound emerged. Not the cheerful melody Caspian had programmed, but a distorted, guttural whisper that seemed to speak directly into their minds, asking a question no one understood, but everyone felt.

Bea gasped, clutching at Juno’s arm. Juno, for once, was silent, her witty retort lost somewhere between her suddenly trembling lips and the cold dread that seeped into the workshop. Caspian stared at the reanimated automaton, its glowing eyes fixed on them. The conversation about community and celebration had been utterly forgotten, replaced by a stark, terrifying realisation: whatever was happening, it was far beyond simple mechanical failure, and it was watching them, waiting for the Vernal Cog-Fête to begin.

The air, thick with the smell of ozone and damp iron, seemed to press in on them, and the distant, unsettling whine of the city amplified, a prelude to something far grander and more terrifying than any broken gear.

Unfinished Tales and Fun Short Stories to Read

The Vernal Cogwheel's Tremor is an unfinished fragment from the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories collection, an experimental, creative research project by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners Storytelling clubs. Each chapter is a unique interdisciplinary arts and narrative storytelling experiment, born from a collaboration between artists and generative AI, designed to explore the boundaries of creative writing, automation, and storytelling. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario.

By design, these stories have no beginning and no end. Many stories are fictional, but many others are not. They are snapshots from worlds that never fully exist, inviting you to imagine what comes before and what happens next. We had fun exploring this project, and hope you will too.