Beneath the Scarlet Canopy
Another Saturday. Another pile of leaves. My whole life felt like this backyard sometimes, just a never-ending cycle of the same old, brown stuff. Brown leaves, brown dirt, the same grey fence. Even the sky looked tired. I wanted to go away from here. Not just to the corner shop, not just to the park. Further. To the place on the map where it says ‘Here Be Dragons,’ even though Mum said those maps were very old and probably wrong. But what if they weren't? What if there was a real 'Here Be Dragons' just beyond Mrs. Henderson’s prize-winning pumpkins? What if I was just too busy raking to notice it?
My hands, already raw at the knuckles, gripped the wooden handle of the rake. The bristles, bent and weary, scraped against the concrete path, making a sound like dry bones. I watched a particularly stubborn oak leaf, a deep crimson, cling to the rough bark of the maple tree. It swayed, defying the wind, refusing to fall into the heap I’d spent the last hour meticulously piling. It had more spirit than me, stuck here, playing autumn janitor. It mocked my domestic servitude. I sighed, a long, dramatic gust of air that fogged in the cool, early afternoon. The air smelled of wet wood and something else, something sharp and metallic, maybe from Mr. Abernathy’s workshop next door.
My gaze drifted past the fence, where the woods began, a dark, tangled border to our perfectly manicured street. The trees were mostly bare now, their branches skeletal against the pale sky, but patches of stubborn, late-season colour clung on – defiant oranges, fading yellows. A squirrel chittered somewhere in the dry undergrowth, a sound that usually sparked some childish joy, but today it just sounded like a critique. *Hurry up, Toby. You’re missing everything.* Missing what? Another episode of Granddad’s gardening show? The thrilling scent of burning leaves? My grand escape plan was still in the mental drafting phase, mostly involving a hot air balloon made of old bedsheets and Mum’s sewing machine, which she kept under strict lock and key.
My boots, scuffed and mud-splattered from last week's ill-fated attempt to find buried treasure near the creek, felt heavy. Each step was an effort. The rake dragged behind me, a reluctant companion. I picked up a small, perfectly round stone, its surface smooth and cool, and flicked it into the pile of leaves. It disappeared with a soft rustle, swallowed by the mundane. I imagined it as a message in a bottle, cast into a vast, leafy ocean, destined for discovery by some future archaeologist who would declare, ‘Ah, the lost civilisation of Toby. Their rituals involved leaf-piling and existential dread.’
A twig snapped at the edge of the yard, just by the peeling paint of our garden shed. My head shot up. My heart gave a hopeful flutter, an embarrassingly reliable signal that something, *anything*, might be about to change. It was Oliver. He was leaning against the fence post, hands shoved into the pockets of his dark blue hoodie, his dark hair falling over his eyes. He wasn’t smiling, not exactly, but there was a tilt to his head, a quiet curiosity in his posture, that made my chest feel… less heavy. Oliver always seemed to appear at the exact moment my internal monologue was about to launch into its most dramatic, unhinged phase.
He just stood there. Patient. His presence was like a warm blanket, a familiar scent. I found myself gripping the rake handle a little tighter, suddenly aware of the dirt on my jeans, the smudge of soil on my cheek. Oliver had that effect on me – he made me notice myself, but not in a bad way. More like, *oh, here I am, being Toby*. It was… comforting, somehow. Like someone else was finally witnessing the epic tragedy of my leaf-raking existence. He observed my leaf piles, then me, then the sky, a slight shift in his weight. He always did that. Just observed.
"Still at it?" he asked, his voice low, a bit raspy from the cold. He didn’t shout, never shouted. His words were always just enough. No more. No less. It was a skill I admired. My own thoughts were a chaotic swarm, a thousand buzzing insects. Oliver's were like stones, chosen and placed with purpose. His breath plumed white in the chilly air.
I shrugged, pushing a particularly stubborn pile of leaves towards the compost bin. "Someone's gotta. Or Mum will send the lawn gnomes after me." I didn't look at him directly. I was afraid that if I did, the sheer magnitude of my longing for escape, mixed with the strange warmth I felt from his presence, might just spill out. And that would be… embarrassing. Mortifying, even. He knew I hated yard work, of course. Everyone knew. It was my personal, autumn-themed prison sentence.
Oliver pushed himself off the fence post, stepping onto the grass. The crunch of leaves under his sneakers was a soft, rhythmic sound, somehow less irritating than my own. He walked over, not towards me, but towards the far corner of the yard, near the old hawthorn hedge that bordered Mrs. Gable’s overgrown garden. He stopped, kicking at a loose piece of bark near the base of the hedge. He stared at it, as if it held the secrets of the universe, his shoulder-length hair almost completely obscuring his face.
"Saw something," he mumbled, his voice almost lost in the rustle of a sudden breeze through the skeletal branches above. A cold shiver ran down my spine, but not from the chill. It was a prickle of anticipation. This was Oliver’s way of saying *adventure*. He never said *adventure*. He just said *saw something* or *found a thing* or *heard a noise*. It was a code, a secret language we’d developed over years of shared scraped knees and whispered secrets.
My rake dropped, clattering lightly against the concrete path. My eyes darted to the hawthorn hedge, then back to Oliver. He was still looking at the bark. My brain, already running on overdrive from the leaf-raking tedium, immediately latched onto this new, tantalising thread. *Saw something.* What kind of something? A tiny dinosaur? A portal to another dimension hidden behind the hedge? A clue to the location of the world's largest chocolate bar? My imagination, bless its overactive heart, started generating scenarios at light speed.
"Where?" I managed, my voice a little higher than usual. My tongue felt thick, suddenly dry. I wiped my hands on my jeans, trying to look casual, trying to pretend that Oliver hadn’t just thrown a lifeline to my drowning spirit.
He finally looked at me, his eyes, usually so serious, held a hint of something unreadable. Mischief? Curiosity? A shared, silent understanding of the ridiculousness of our lives? "Behind the old mill. By the river," he said, gesturing vaguely over his shoulder, towards the woods beyond the hedge. "Felt… old. Like it’s always been there. Never noticed it before."
The old mill. That was the place everyone avoided. Too rusty, too dangerous, Mum always said. Full of tetanus and possibly ghosts. Which, of course, made it infinitely more interesting. *Always been there. Never noticed it before.* Oliver’s words resonated with a strange, profound weight in my young mind. It was exactly how I felt about my own life here. Everything was always here, and I felt like I was perpetually just on the verge of noticing it, truly seeing it for the first time.
I looked from Oliver to the hedge, then to the woods beyond. The grey sky seemed to press down on everything, but there was a new glint of light, a spark. My chest, moments ago heavy with boredom, felt lighter, almost buoyant. It wasn’t a hot air balloon to 'Here Be Dragons', not yet. But it was a step. A path. A small, tantalising crack in the familiar.
"Today?" I asked, my gaze meeting his. There was no need for more words. The question hung between us, heavy with meaning. Are we doing this? Are we going to step into the not-yet-noticed? Are we going to actually *do* something? My heart hammered a hopeful rhythm against my ribs.
Oliver just nodded, a small, almost imperceptible movement. His hand, as he turned to look back at the hedge, brushed lightly against mine, a fleeting warmth that sent a surprising jolt through me. It was gone as quickly as it came, leaving behind a tingle. He didn't say anything else. Just looked at the hedge, then back at me. A silent invitation. A shared, unspoken pact.
My raking forgotten, the pile of leaves a distant memory, I began to walk towards the hawthorn hedge, Oliver beside me, the crisp autumn air now feeling less like a cage and more like a promise. The 'Here Be Dragons' might still be on an old map, but 'Something New' was definitely just beyond the familiar, thorny border of Mrs. Gable’s garden. And for the first time all day, I didn’t feel like going away from here. I felt like going *to* somewhere.
A Whisper from the Woods
We stood at the edge of the hawthorn hedge, the prickly branches catching at my jumper. The smell of damp earth was stronger here, mixed with the faint, sweet decay of fallen fruit from Mrs. Gable's neglected apple tree. Oliver was already pushing aside a low-hanging branch, his back to me, creating a narrow gap. His movements were fluid, almost soundless. Mine, by contrast, felt clumsy, like a startled deer navigating a thicket.
"Careful," he muttered, holding the branch for me. It scraped against my cheek, a small, sharp tickle. I pushed through, landing a little awkwardly on the other side, feeling a small thorn prick my arm. It didn't hurt much. Just a tiny, sharp reminder of the real world, the one beyond the perfect lawn.
The ground on this side was uneven, thick with last year's leaves and straggling weeds. The path, if you could call it that, was barely visible, a faint indent in the undergrowth. We weren’t in the woods yet, not really. This was the liminal space, the neglected borderland between our houses and the wilder parts beyond. It felt a bit thrilling, a bit forbidden, even though it was technically just a strip of municipal land no one ever bothered with.
Oliver waited for me to catch up, then started walking, not looking back. His stride was even, purposeful. I followed, my eyes scanning the ground for tripping hazards, my mind buzzing with a mixture of apprehension and pure, unadulterated excitement. The sun, previously hidden, managed to break through a thin patch of cloud, sending a weak, watery shaft of light filtering through the trees. It painted the path ahead in fleeting, golden hues, illuminating dust motes dancing in the chill air.
He stopped abruptly, pointing to something on the ground with his toe. It was a crushed soda can, an old, faded brand I barely recognised. A small, mundane detail, yet in this context, it felt like an ancient artefact, a clue left by some forgotten explorer. I knelt, poking at it with my finger. It was cold, damp. The metal was dull, corroded slightly. What stories could it tell? Probably just the story of some kid who threw their rubbish on the ground.
"This way," Oliver said, pulling me back to the present. He wasn't waiting for my analysis of the ancient soda can. He was already moving, deeper into the narrow trail. The air grew colder, the sounds of suburbia fading behind us, replaced by the soft whisper of the wind through the remaining leaves and the distant caw of a crow. My heart beat a little faster. This wasn't just walking. This was stepping into the unknown.
The trees began to thicken, their branches intertwining above, creating a dim, natural canopy. The light grew dappled, fleeting. I could feel the rough texture of bark as I brushed past a tall pine. The smell of pine needles, sharp and resinous, filled my nostrils. This wasn't the manicured world of our backyard. This was wilder, older. It felt like something was waiting.
Oliver slowed, glancing over his shoulder, a silent check. I nodded, out of breath already, a slight stitch in my side. My excitement was battling with the mild physical exertion. He offered a small, almost imperceptible smile, then turned back, his dark hoodie a disappearing shadow ahead of me. We were on our way. Not to dragons, not yet. But towards something new, something discovered, something that felt like it belonged only to us. The world suddenly felt bigger. Full of possibilities.
Unfinished Tales and Fun Short Stories to Read
Beneath the Scarlet Canopy is an unfinished fragment from the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories collection, an experimental, creative research project by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners Storytelling clubs. Each chapter is a unique interdisciplinary arts and narrative storytelling experiment, born from a collaboration between artists and generative AI, designed to explore the boundaries of creative writing, automation, and storytelling. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario.
By design, these stories have no beginning and no end. Many stories are fictional, but many others are not. They are snapshots from worlds that never fully exist, inviting you to imagine what comes before and what happens next. We had fun exploring this project, and hope you will too.