A Script for Echoes in the Gilded Cage

by Jamie F. Bell

The vastness of the Obsidian Gallery was a constant, oppressive presence, a monument to a world that had unravelled long ago. Eleanor paused, her hand brushing the cold, smooth surface of a display case that still held a single, petrified silk scarf. Its intricate pattern was barely visible beneath layers of dust. The scent of damp concrete and forgotten perfume clung to the air, a faint, metallic tang of decay. She pulled her coat tighter, the chill seeping into her bones despite the exertion.

"Any sign of the 'Blue Conduit,' Kaito?" Her voice, usually firm, was a hushed whisper, swallowed by the cavernous space. Her eyes scanned the towering shelves, now empty husks, each one a relic of conspicuous consumption.

Kaito, always a step ahead, was already crouched beside a skeletal escalator, his slim fingers tracing faded symbols on a peeling service panel. He wasn't the tallest of men, but his presence was solid, watchful. His dark eyes, usually unreadable, flickered with a quiet intensity. "Not directly. But the schematics from the Annex indicate a primary power manifold ran through this sector. If the Blue Conduit fed into the Central Node, it had to draw from here."

Finn, perpetually looking over his shoulder, clutched a worn tablet to his chest. His breath plumed in the cold air. "Are we sure about the Central Node? The old texts are so ambiguous. What if it's just… an architectural folly? A dead end of a forgotten dream?"

Eleanor turned, a faint, weary smile touching her lips. "Then we'll have followed a ghost, Finn. But a ghost is better than nothing." She believed in the 'Node,' in the whispers of an intact system, a heartbeat beneath the city's ruin. It was a belief born of necessity, of the desperate human need for connection, for answers.


They moved like shadows themselves, their footsteps echoing softly as they navigated the debris-strewn aisles. Twisted metal frames, shattered glass, and the ghostly remnants of retail displays formed a labyrinth. Kaito led the way, his headlamp a small beacon in the encroaching gloom, its beam cutting through the dust, revealing discarded price tags and the skeletal remains of high-end accessories. He wasn't just looking for the conduit; he was reading the silent language of the mall's infrastructure, the subtle shifts in engineering, the pathways of its forgotten lifeblood.

"Here," Kaito murmured, his voice barely audible above the hum of the distant, decaying infrastructure that was always a part of the mall's background noise. He pointed to a section of the wall, where a faint blue line, almost indistinguishable from the grime, snaked its way into a thick bundle of rusted pipes and defunct wiring. "It's been painted over, probably during a renovation cycle long before… everything."

Eleanor knelt beside him, her gloved fingers gently scraping away a layer of dust. Beneath, the blue line was indeed vibrant, electric, almost glowing against the dull grey. "Clever," she observed. "They wanted it hidden. Why?"

"Perhaps privacy," Finn offered, peering closer, his anxiety momentarily replaced by academic curiosity. "Or protection. The 'Central Node' was rumored to handle sensitive data, critical infrastructure during its prime. It wouldn't surprise me if they tried to obscure its true pathways."

Kaito was already at work, his tools glinting in the narrow beam of his light. He carefully pried open a corroded access panel. A faint, almost imperceptible hum emanated from within. It was a vibration, a whisper of power, barely there, but undeniable. "It’s alive," he breathed, a rare note of genuine surprise in his usually stoic voice. "Still active. Not much, but it’s there. And it’s feeding something."

Eleanor felt a flicker of warmth, a small spark of the hope she clung to. "Then the Node isn't a ghost. It's just sleeping."


A sudden, sharp clang echoed from deeper within the gallery, distinct from the mall's usual groans and creaks. It sounded like metal against metal, sharp and deliberate. All three froze, eyes wide, breath held.

Kaito extinguished his headlamp instantly. "Down!" he hissed, pulling Eleanor behind a collapsed register stand. Finn, already a bundle of nerves, melted into the shadows behind a stack of fallen mannequins, tablet clutched tight.

The silence that followed was suffocating, punctuated only by their own hammering heartbeats. Eleanor listened, her senses straining. Was it just a piece of the structure giving way? Or something else? The mall, even in its decay, was never truly empty. They weren't the only scavengers, the only seekers of what remained. But the others usually stuck to the easily accessible, the purely material. This was different. This felt… purposeful.

Minutes stretched, each one feeling like an hour. No further sounds. Eleanor risked a glance, her eyes adjusting to the deeper gloom. The vast space remained still, eerie. Kaito, beside her, was a statue, his breathing barely perceptible. Finn, a pale silhouette, seemed to have stopped breathing altogether.

"Alright," Eleanor whispered, her voice rough. "It's clear, for now. Finn, anything on the old diagrams for this specific conduit? Beyond general power?"

Finn emerged, a ghost himself. "The 'Obsidian Gallery branch' was a dedicated line," he murmured, scrolling furiously on his tablet. "It wasn't just for retail. It serviced… a 'sub-level data nexus.' Not mentioned in the public records. Classified, probably. There's a notation here, faint, almost illegible, about an access point near the old security office, directly below us."

"A sub-level data nexus," Kaito repeated, his gaze distant. "That's bigger than a simple power manifold. That's a brain, or what's left of one."


Following the faint hum and Finn's updated, albeit fractured, schematics, they descended. The escalator was a twisted monument to sloth, its steps frozen in mid-descent. They picked their way down, flashlights sweeping across the grimy walls, revealing graffiti, some ancient and faded, others startlingly fresh. Tags of unknown factions, warnings, symbols they didn't recognize. The sense of being watched, of encroaching on someone else's territory, intensified.

The air grew colder, thicker, carrying a faint, metallic scent that wasn't entirely rust. It smelled of ozone, and something else – a deep, resonant electrical current. The hum, no longer faint, vibrated through the floor beneath their feet, a low thrumming that pulsed with an almost organic rhythm. It was a heartbeat, slow and steady, beneath the dying city.

They found the security office, a small, fortified room, its reinforced steel door half-torn from its hinges. Inside, the console screens were black, shattered, but the faint blue line of the conduit continued, disappearing into the floor. Finn pointed to a section of the wall beside a defunct server rack, where a faint, almost invisible seam ran from floor to ceiling. "This is it," he breathed, his voice filled with a mixture of dread and awe. "The access point. It's meant to blend perfectly."

Kaito ran his fingers along the seam, a faint smile playing on his lips. "Well, not perfectly anymore." He produced a small, specialized tool, its tip glowing faintly. With practiced ease, he worked it into the gap. A soft click echoed in the small room, followed by a deeper, more resonant thrum from behind the hidden panel. The seam widened, revealing a sliver of darkness, and then, slowly, ponderously, the hidden section of the wall began to slide inward, revealing a narrow, unlit corridor.

The hum intensified, a powerful, unwavering vibration that seemed to resonate in their very bones. The air in the newly revealed passage was still, cold, yet alive with an almost palpable energy. It was a stark contrast to the stagnant decay of the mall above. Eleanor stepped forward, her hand reaching for Kaito's arm, her gaze fixed on the darkness ahead. This was it. The door to their ghost. Or to something else entirely.

"Are we sure we want to know what's in there?" Finn whispered, his voice trembling, but his eyes, despite his fear, were wide with an undeniable curiosity, drawn by the same magnetic pull. The light of Kaito's lamp sliced into the darkness, but could not penetrate its depths. What secrets had this forgotten nexus guarded for so long? What hope or terror lay dormant, waiting for their touch?


They stood at the precipice, three figures silhouetted against the weak light filtering from the security office, staring into a deeper, humming darkness that promised either illumination or oblivion. The air vibrated with a silent question, an ancient challenge. Whatever lay beyond that threshold, it was waiting, and its silence was more eloquent than any shout. And for the first time in a long time, Eleanor felt a tremor of something beyond mere survival – a potent, dangerous hope.

She took a deep breath, the metallic tang of the hidden chamber filling her lungs, and stepped forward, into the unknown.

The hum grew louder, a chorus of dormant circuits awakening to their presence.

About This Script

This script is part of the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories project, a creative research initiative by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners collectives. Each script outlines a potential cinematic or episodic adaptation of its corresponding chapter. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario.

These scripts serve as a bridge between the literary fragment and the screen, exploring how the story's core themes, characters, and atmosphere could be translated into a visual medium.