Winter's Bitter Bargain

by Eva Suluk

Briar watched her breath curl like an ephemeral promise in the frigid air, a tiny, fleeting cloud against the rough-hewn stone of the Gathering Hall. She tucked her mittened hands deeper into the worn pockets of her parka, the synthetic fur trim around her hood stiff with frost. Her boots, patched and re-stitched countless times, shifted restlessly on the packed earth floor. The Hall, usually a place of boisterous storytelling and shared meals, felt taut today, stretched thin like old leather in the cold. It was the ‘Accord of the Northern Reach’ that did it, she thought, not for the first time. The words themselves sounded like a slow, deliberate tightening, a noose made of good intentions.

Her grandfather, Maeve, had always told her that the coldest winters weren’t about the snow that buried the world, but the fear that froze the heart. Briar wondered if this was what he meant, this creeping paralysis in the very air, the way people averted their gazes when Rennie spoke, or clutched their mugs just a little tighter when Maeve began to weave his slow, considered words. She hated the way things were changing, the subtle erosion of the stories that had built The Hollow, piece by careful piece, from the dust of the old world.

“We have endured,” Maeve's voice, raspy with age and the chill that always clung to his lungs, cut through the hushed murmurs. He stood by the roaring central hearth, his silhouette framed by dancing flames, making him seem both ancient and impossibly fragile. “We have endured alone, built this place, brick by brick, from the remnants. Our freedom, our way, it was forged in the deep snows of the Sundering, not granted by some distant… 'Commonwealth'.” The last word, Commonwealth, came out like a bad taste in his mouth, a shard of ice on his tongue.

Briar saw Rennie, younger, sharper-edged, shift his weight near the Hall’s main door. He was always by the door, as if ready to leave, or expecting someone to arrive. His face was a mask of practiced calm, but Briar could see the slight tremor in his jaw, the way his fingers tapped an impatient rhythm against his thigh. He was wearing the new, sleek grey tunic, a gift from a recent trade caravan, a stark contrast to Maeve’s homespun wool and patched leather. Rennie represented the future, or so he claimed. A future of easier trade routes, of shared burdens, of… dependence, Briar’s mind supplied, a word as bitter as unripe rowan berries.

“With respect, Elder Maeve,” Rennie began, his voice smooth, carefully modulated to soothe and persuade, “The world has changed. The Gulch to the west, the settlements across the Frozen Lake – they've joined. Their harvests are bountiful, their patrols strong. We… we are small. We are isolated. The Accord offers safety, resources. A chance to build, not just endure.” His gaze swept across the faces in the Hall, lingering on the younger ones, the ones whose bellies grumbled louder in lean winters, whose fear of the Outsiders was a fresh, constant ache.

Briar’s own stomach gave a quiet, protesting rumble. She’d been foraging for late-season fire moss all morning, the chill seeping into her bones despite her layers. She thought of the meagre rations, the thinning game trails, the constant gnaw of anxiety over the next frost, the next snow, the next empty larder. Rennie’s words were seductive, a siren song against the endless, biting cold. But then she remembered the stories, the songs of their ancestors, the ones who had found this forgotten hollow and carved out a life when the world outside had fractured into chaos. They hadn’t joined; they had *built*.

“And what, precisely, do we give in return for this… 'Accord'?” Maeve asked, his eyes, like deep, shadowed pools, fixed on Rennie. “Our autonomy? Our unique way of governance, born of necessity and trust, not imposed decrees? Our knowledge of these specific lands, passed down for generations? What becomes of our history, then, if it is subsumed by a larger whole that cares little for the unique twists of our particular story?”

Rennie managed a small, dismissive shrug, the movement almost imperceptible. “Details. Practicalities. The Commonwealth leadership are not savages, Elder. They understand the need for local customs. But we must be realistic. We need their medicines, their metal tools. Our old ways, while admirable, cannot always sustain us. We cannot live forever in the past, huddled against the world.”

Briar felt a sudden, sharp indignation bloom in her chest, hot despite the cold. *Huddled against the world?* They weren't huddled; they were *rooted*. Their stories, their songs, the very names of the mountains and the frozen rivers – they were all part of a larger tapestry that Rennie seemed determined to unravel. The Council was just a collection of elected voices, but their decisions felt heavier than stone, capable of shifting the very ground beneath their feet.

A few voices, younger and more anxious, spoke up then, overlapping. “But the winter, Rennie… it was hard last year.” “My child is still coughing from the damp.” “They say The Commonwealth has warmth… proper warmth.” Their words were small, desperate pleas, echoing the hidden fears Briar herself often battled late at night when the wind sang its hungry dirge outside her small, shared dwelling.

“And what of the ‘Great Charter’?” Maeve’s voice rose, cutting through the rising tide of murmurs. “The Charter that defines our boundaries, our self-governance, written in the hand of our First Builders, signed by those who chose this solitude?” He looked pointedly at Rennie. “Have you forgotten the wisdom of the founders so quickly?”

Rennie offered a tight, almost condescending smile. “The ‘Great Charter,’ Elder, is a relic. A fine piece of sentiment, perhaps, but hardly a binding document in the new world. It defines a world that no longer exists.”

A cold splinter of fear pierced Briar's thought. A relic? Her grandfather talked about the Charter as if it were the very breath of The Hollow. She remembered the stories of how it was meticulously crafted, not just as rules, but as a living testament to their struggle and their fiercely guarded independence. If Rennie considered it a 'relic,' then what else would he dismiss, what else would he allow to be forgotten? Her gaze fell to the worn, scuffed floorboards, each groan and creak a familiar sound, a small part of The Hollow’s persistent song.


The meeting drew to a close with no clear resolution, just a lingering, heavy tension. Rennie had swayed a few more to his side, Briar could tell. The older faces looked grim, the younger ones torn. As people shuffled out, their breath pluming into the cold afternoon, Briar caught Maeve’s eye. He gave her a subtle, almost imperceptible nod, a flicker of understanding that passed between them without a single spoken word. It was enough. A silent instruction, a burden shared. She knew what she had to do.

The archive was always cold, but today it felt like the very air had ceased to move, caught in a permanent, ancient freeze. Briar pushed open the heavy, creaking door, a faint smell of mildewed paper and something vaguely earthy, like forgotten soil, reaching her. The building was old, one of the few structures from before the Sundering that had been mostly preserved, its stone walls thick and resolute. Inside, towering shelves of wood, long bleached of their original colour, stretched towards the distant ceiling, laden with the detritus of a past world. Books with broken spines, scrolls tied with brittle twine, maps yellowed and curling at the edges, tools no one recognised anymore. A repository of forgotten lives, frozen in time.

She pulled the hood of her parka tighter, the synthetic fur tickling her chin. Her hands, despite the mittens, felt clumsy with cold. The sunlight, what little there was on this mid-winter afternoon, struggled to penetrate the grime-coated windows, casting long, fractured bars of weak light across the dusty aisles. Each step she took sent a faint puff of powdery dust into the still air, visible motes dancing in the meager light, like tiny, lost stars.

“The Great Charter,” she whispered to herself, the words feeling heavy on her tongue. It wasn’t just a piece of paper; it was the blueprint of their defiance, the silent roar against the chaos that had swallowed the world. If Rennie could simply wave it away as a ‘relic,’ then perhaps its true meaning, its hidden power, was not fully understood, even by Maeve. She needed to find it. Not just a copy, but the original. The *true* one.

Briar moved slowly, deliberately, through the labyrinth of shelves. The silence here was profound, broken only by the faint rasp of her own breathing and the occasional, almost imperceptible creak of old wood settling. She ran her gloved hand along the spines of books, feeling the rough texture of ancient cloth, the smooth chill of leather, the brittle flaking of paper. There were books on everything: 'Hydroponic Cultivation Techniques,' 'The Philosophy of the Pre-Sundering Era,' 'Atlas of the Northern Hemisphere.' She even saw a worn volume titled 'A Comprehensive Guide to Foraging for Edible Fungi,' which she knew Maeve still referenced frequently.

She remembered Maeve talking about a specific section, tucked away, where the 'Foundational Documents' were kept. A place beyond the usual research scrolls, a place less visited. A quiet, deep breath, tasting faintly of cold, dry paper and an echo of something metallic, like ancient ink. She found it after what felt like an hour, a narrow, unlit alcove at the very back of the archive, shielded by a heavy canvas sheet, faded and stiff with age. The air here was even colder, prickling her exposed skin.

Pulling the canvas aside, she stepped into the gloom. The shelves here were different: not open, but lined with small, numbered drawers, each with a tarnished brass pull. Her fingers, despite the cold, felt a tremor of anticipation. This was it. This was where the oldest, most guarded truths were kept. Her eyes, adjusting to the dimness, scanned for any hint, any old, almost-forgotten symbol that might point to the Charter.

She tried a few drawers, their wooden slides groaning in protest, revealing bundles of faded letters, dried botanical specimens, and what looked like old mining permits. Nothing. Her frustration began to bloom, a tight knot in her stomach, pushing against the fear of wasting time, of failing Maeve, of failing The Hollow itself. *Huddled against the world*, Rennie’s words echoed, dismissive and cruel.

Then, in the deepest corner of the alcove, behind a stack of what appeared to be very old, meticulously hand-drawn star charts, she found it. Not a drawer, but a false back. Her fingers, nimble despite the mittens, worked at the seam, pushing and prying. A soft click echoed loudly in the pervasive quiet. The entire section of shelf swung inwards, revealing a shallow, narrow cavity. Inside, nested in what looked like dried, preserved moss, were two items. One was a scroll, tightly bound with a thin, silvered ribbon, its paper a deep, almost black parchment. The other was a small, crudely drawn map, folded many times over, its edges soft with wear. It was not the crisp, formal document she’d expected. This was… intimate.

Briar carefully lifted the map first, her fingers brushing against the ancient, brittle paper. It was a depiction of The Hollow and its immediate surroundings, but with strange, almost whimsical details she didn't recognise: twisting lines that looked like forgotten rivers, symbols like tiny, watchful eyes, and a single, bold X marked precisely where The Hollow now stood. But more chilling was a series of faded, archaic script along the bottom edge, almost illegible, mentioning ‘The Deep Seal’ and ‘The Vigilant Promise.’

She then took the scroll, heavier than the map, and carefully untied the silvered ribbon, her heart thumping a quick, erratic rhythm against her ribs. The parchment unfurled slowly, revealing a hand-drawn illustration at the top: not the familiar crest of The Hollow, but a stark, simplified image of a single, watchful eye, rendered in an unsettlingly precise black ink. Below it, in flowing, elegant script, were words she recognised from Maeve’s stories, fragments of the 'Great Charter.' But there were other parts, too, dense paragraphs detailing specific obligations, hidden clauses she'd never heard before. And at the very bottom, a signature she didn't know, beneath a seal that was also a watchful eye, etched with an unnerving intensity.

One line, however, stood out, etched deeper into the parchment, perhaps even underlined in a faded red pigment. It spoke not of freedom, but of *containment*. Not of a chosen solitude, but of a *guarded purpose*. The Hollow, it seemed, was not just a sanctuary forged from the ashes of the old world. It was something else entirely. Something… kept. Her blood ran cold, colder than the archive’s perpetual chill. The faint metallic scent in the air now seemed to deepen, like the taste of old iron. Briar looked at the archaic map, then back at the scroll, her mind racing, piecing together fragments. The map showed a single path *out* of The Hollow, marked with the same watchful eye, leading not to freedom, but to a vast, blank space labelled: ‘THE ENDLESS PERIMETER.’

Unfinished Tales and Fun Short Stories to Read

Winter's Bitter Bargain is an unfinished fragment from the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories collection, an experimental, creative research project by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners Storytelling clubs. Each chapter is a unique interdisciplinary arts and narrative storytelling experiment, born from a collaboration between artists and generative AI, designed to explore the boundaries of creative writing, automation, and storytelling. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario.

By design, these stories have no beginning and no end. Many stories are fictional, but many others are not. They are snapshots from worlds that never fully exist, inviting you to imagine what comes before and what happens next. We had fun exploring this project, and hope you will too.