A Trace of Something Unseen

by Jamie F. Bell

James wiped the condensation from his comms watch, a futile gesture. No signal, not since the last rise, three hours back. He hadn't expected one, not really, but the automatic reflex persisted, a ghost limb of the old world. The woods here were different. Not just the quiet – a silence that felt less like peace and more like a held breath – but the colour of everything. Autumn usually brought fiery bursts of orange and crimson, but these leaves, where they hadn't already dropped, were a sickly, muted ochre, or a strangely vibrant, almost neon, green.

"See anything?" Benton's voice was low, careful, just a breath above the rustle of their boots on the fallen leaves. He kept his hood up, like James, though the air was still enough not to warrant it for warmth alone. Protection. Always protection.

James shook his head, scanning the tree line, then the undergrowth. "Just more of… this." He gestured vaguely at a patch of ferns, their fronds curled inwards, brittle, like ancient parchment. There were no birds, no squirrels chittering, not even the buzz of insects. Just the wind, when it chose to stir, a hollow sigh through the skeletal branches of the older pines.

Benton shifted the weight of his pack, the straps groaning softly. "The map said… there should be a stream, about here. Half-mile south of the old logging track." He pulled a folded, water-stained piece of paper from a waterproof pouch, the creases almost worn through. It was a crude, hand-drawn thing, marked with faded pencil lines and illegible scribbles.

James squinted at it, pulling a hand lens from his utility belt. The details were almost gone. "This thing's older than us, Benton. Who even drew it?" He remembered a brief, frantic conversation with a prospector, months ago, before the zones were fully established, before the news had truly sunk its teeth in. The man, a gaunt, wild-eyed sort, had spoken of 'back routes' and 'forgotten paths' to the reservoir, ways to bypass the initial checkpoints that had been hastily thrown up.

"Doesn't matter who. Matters if it's right." Benton knelt, brushing aside a thick mat of moss. His fingers, covered by thin work gloves, probed the damp earth. "Ground's sloped down this way. Water always finds the path of least resistance." He looked up, his eyes meeting James's, a flicker of grim determination there. "Least resistance, James. That's us, isn't it?"

James didn't answer. He just watched the way the sun, struggling through the perpetual haze, made the dust motes dance in the shaft of light that broke through the canopy. He hated the dust. Hated the wind. Loved the old man’s phrase: 'The atom’s ghost, invisible and hungry.' He could almost feel it, a subtle prickle on his skin, a faint tremor in the air. Probably just nerves. Definitely nerves.

A Stillness That Gripped

They walked for another hour, the silence amplifying every crunch of a twig, every whisper of Benton's breath. James found himself listening for things that weren't there – the distant rumble of traffic, the familiar caw of a crow. The absence was louder than any sound. He tripped over a exposed root, catching himself before he fell, his knee knocking sharply against a tree trunk. A loose flake of bark peeled away, smelling faintly of something metallic, not quite iron, not quite salt.

"Easy," Benton murmured, not even looking back, already ahead, his gaze fixed on some unseen point. Benton had always been like that, driven, pragmatic. James, on the other hand, felt every step, every ache, every doubt.

They came to a small clearing, dominated by a cluster of skeletal birch trees. Their bark was a startling, unnatural white, almost bleached, and they were utterly devoid of leaves, even though other trees nearby still clung to their sickly foliage. In the centre of the clearing, a shallow depression had collected rainwater, forming a pool. It was unnaturally still, reflecting the grey sky with a strange, iridescent sheen. Not blue, not green, but a shifting, sickly rainbow of colours that seemed to hover on the surface.

"There," Benton said, pointing with a gloved finger. His voice was flat. "The stream. Or what's left of it."

James felt a cold wave wash over him, colder than the air. The water was stagnant, not flowing. The map had indicated a moving current, a feeder for the larger reservoir. This… this was just a puddle, but a terrible one. There was no life around it, no insects skimming the surface, no signs of anything having drunk from it. The ground around the edge was cracked and dry, despite the recent rains.

He knelt carefully, pulling a small, handheld Geiger counter from his pack. The device, usually a comforting presence, felt heavy and cold in his hand. He slowly lowered it towards the water. The click, click, click began almost immediately, hesitant at first, then rapidly escalating into a frantic, high-pitched whine that vibrated through his fingertips.

"Shit," Benton hissed, pulling back a step. "That bad?"

James didn't answer, his eyes fixed on the digital display. The numbers climbed, then stabilised at a level that made his stomach clench. He pulled the counter back, the whine slowly subsiding to an agitated purr. "Worse than I thought. Much worse." He looked at Benton, the fear etched plainly on his friend's face. "This whole watershed, Benton. It's… it's steeped."

He remembered the images from the news, the grainy footage of the repository breach. The impossible cascade of glowing green liquid, the frantic, useless scrambling of hazmat teams, their suits suddenly looking fragile, insufficient. They'd said it was contained. Said it wouldn't spread this far. Lies. All of it. James felt a familiar surge of anger, hot and pointless, welling up in his throat. It mixed with the bitter taste in his mouth, metallic and acrid.


Whispers of an Unseen Tide

A sudden gust of wind ripped through the clearing, far stronger than anything they'd felt all day. It whipped dead leaves into a frantic dance, stirring up a fine, almost invisible dust from the cracked earth around the iridescent pool. James instinctively turned his back, hunching his shoulders, pulling his scarf higher over his face. He heard Benton cough, a dry, ragged sound, then a muffled curse. The wind picked up, howling through the birch trees, a mournful, hungry sound that seemed to carry the very essence of decay.

He tasted grit, felt it in his eyes, scratching at the corners. He thought of the 'atom's ghost' again, an unseen adversary carried on every current. His heart hammered against his ribs. This was why they wore the masks, why they kept the hoods up. A single, invisible particle, breathed deep, could unravel everything.

When the gust finally subsided, leaving a trembling silence in its wake, James slowly lowered his arm. Benton was wiping his eyes, his shoulders still hunched. "You alright?" James asked, his voice rough.

Benton nodded, a short, jerky movement. "Just… got some in my eye. Hurts a bit." He blinked several times, then swore again, more softly. "We need to get out of this open space. Now. Where's that path?"

James consulted the map again, his fingers tracing the faint lines. "It should be… further east. Beyond that ridge." He pointed towards a low, humped rise, topped with a dense cluster of sickly-looking pines. "If this map's still accurate, there's an old service road that runs along the crest. Used to be for fire breaks, long before…"

He let the sentence trail off, the implication hanging in the air. 'Long before' the world decided to tear itself open. They skirted the contaminated pool carefully, giving it a wide berth, the Geiger counter still pulsing a quiet, warning thrum in James's pocket. Every step felt like a gamble, every breath a risk.

As they climbed the low ridge, the ground became rockier, strewn with loose fragments of shale. James slipped, his foot twisting, a sharp pain lancing through his ankle. He gritted his teeth, forcing himself upright. "Just a twisted ankle," he muttered, more to himself than to Benton, who was already a few paces ahead.

He limped onward, the pain a dull ache that grounded him, ironically, in the present. His mind, however, kept drifting. He remembered the smell of fresh laundry, the taste of real coffee. Small, irrelevant details, but they clung to him like burrs, reminders of a life that felt like a story someone else had told him.

From the crest of the ridge, they could finally see it. A faint, almost entirely overgrown scar in the landscape. A track, barely wider than a hiking trail now, choked with weeds and saplings, but unmistakably man-made. It snaked through the trees, heading roughly north-east, away from the worst of the visible contamination.

"There it is," Benton said, a note of something almost like relief in his voice. "The old service road. Thought this map was just another fantasy."

James looked at the path, then back at the horizon, where the sky was starting to take on the bruised purples of late afternoon. It was a path, yes. But where did it lead? And what would they find along it? He could feel a faint vibration in the soles of his boots, a low, almost imperceptible hum that seemed to resonate from the very earth itself. It had been there, on and off, for a while now. He didn't know what it meant, but it settled a fresh layer of dread deep in his gut.

He glanced at Benton, whose face was still a mask of weary concentration. "You hear that?" James asked, keeping his voice low.

Benton paused, tilting his head. He listened, his brow furrowed. "Hear what? Just the wind, James. Always the wind."

But it wasn't just the wind. James could feel it, a resonance. A lingering tremor from deep within the earth, a faint echo of the catastrophic event that had reshaped their world, whispering of the dangers that still lay buried, waiting.

"Right," James said, trying to shake the feeling. "Just the wind."

They stepped onto the overgrown track, the soft earth giving way under their boots. The path was uneven, littered with broken branches and slick moss. The hum, however, seemed to intensify, a low, guttural vibration that now felt like it was coming from everywhere, from the roots Bentoneath their feet, from the very air they breathed. It was an insidious, constant presence, a reminder that even in this desolation, something was still active, still alive, and utterly unknowable. And whatever it was, it was getting louder.

James hesitated, his hand instinctively going to his comms unit, then stopping. No signal. Not out here. Not ever again.

Unfinished Tales and Fun Short Stories to Read

A Trace of Something Unseen is an unfinished fragment from the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories collection, an experimental, creative research project by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners Storytelling clubs. Each chapter is a unique interdisciplinary arts and narrative storytelling experiment, born from a collaboration between artists and generative AI, designed to explore the boundaries of creative writing, automation, and storytelling. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario.

By design, these stories have no beginning and no end. Many stories are fictional, but many others are not. They are snapshots from worlds that never fully exist, inviting you to imagine what comes before and what happens next. We had fun exploring this project, and hope you will too.