The First Thaw

by Tony Eetak

It always started like this, didn't it? Not with a bang, but with a whisper of something broken, something utterly out of place. Graham blew into his cupped hands, the sound a thin rasp against the deep quiet of the woods. The air stung, cold enough to make his nostrils ache, and the snow stretched endless, sparkling under a flat, colourless sky. He'd seen plenty of dead things in the snow, usually just a pale, messy blotch against the white, a grim, undeniable fact. This, however, was different. This was art. Bad, unsettling art, but art nonetheless.

He watched the forensics team, their breath pluming like small, frantic ghosts, moving around the scene. The body, a man in what looked like faded work clothes, lay perfectly centred in a small, almost perfectly circular clearing. Around him, carefully arranged, were small, brightly coloured children's toys: a chipped red truck, a yellow plastic duck, a small, worn teddy bear missing an eye. They were too clean, too deliberate against the pristine snow. Like some forgotten, whimsical offering to a particularly cruel winter god.

Graham dug the heels of his boots into the frozen earth, feeling the crunch of compressed snow. A thought, unbidden, surfaced: how much effort did it take to disrupt the mundane like this? To take a life, yes, but then to stage it with such… flourish? It felt like a decision, a choice to leave everything old and predictable behind, to embrace a new, chaotic canvas. Not the kind of change he was looking for in his own life, certainly, but a change nonetheless. He’d been thinking of changing his brand of tea, maybe finally getting around to fixing that leaky tap in the kitchen. Small, domestic disruptions. This was a different scale of disruption entirely.

Sergeant Miller, young and earnest, approached, his cheeks raw crimson from the cold. He held a small notebook, his pen barely visible through gloved fingers. "Inspector? Dr. Youngson is on their way. Initial observation, no visible wounds. Looks like… exposure? But the setup…"

Miller trailed off, gesturing vaguely at the tableau. Graham nodded, his gaze still fixed on the red truck. The paint was peeling, revealing grey plastic underneath. It smelled of cold metal and something else, faint, like old laundry detergent. "The setup," Graham repeated, his voice low, a puff of steam in the frigid air. "Yes, the setup. That's the real question, isn't it? Anyone know who our artist is?"

Miller shifted his weight. "Uniforms are canvassing the nearest village. It's a fair trek, this spot. Not exactly on the main trail. Someone knew this clearing, or stumbled on it. Either way, they put in the leg work." He blew on his hands again, then tucked them into his armpits.

Graham looked at the teddy bear. One button eye gone. A bit of stuffing escaping from a seam in its arm. He wondered if the killer had carried these items specifically for the purpose, or if they were scavenged. Did they have a meaning? Was this some sort of macabre farewell, or a grotesque joke? The whimsical elements warred with the stark reality of the frozen body, creating a dissonance that hummed under his skin.

He took a slow step towards the edge of the clearing, careful not to disturb the tracks the forensics team had already marked. The snow here was still pristine, a fresh fall from the previous night, layered over older, crustier ice. The sheer quiet was oppressive, broken only by the distant squawk of a jay and the crunch of boots. He closed his eyes for a moment, letting the cold press against his eyelids. He felt the minute grit of snow under his boots, the stiff fabric of his wool trousers against his legs.

His own life felt a bit like this clearing sometimes. Clean, precise, but with a growing sense of something missing, something that needed to be added, or removed, to make it whole again. The desire for change, the spark, he thought. Sometimes it was a quiet hum, sometimes it was a flash of lightning. For this poor soul, it seemed to have been a final, chilling statement. Or perhaps, for the one who put him here, it was the spark.


Initial Scene Processing

Dr. Youngson arrived then, a small, determined woman with a head of bright, messy red hair, her breath coming in short, sharp bursts as she navigated the uneven terrain. She carried her kit with a practiced ease, her movements efficient despite the cold. She didn't bother with small talk, just nodded a quick greeting to Graham and Miller before kneeling beside the victim, her gloved fingers already feeling for temperature, scanning for details.

"Right then, what have we here?" she murmured, more to herself than to anyone else. Her voice was low, almost a growl. Graham watched her work, the careful way she swept away a dusting of snow from the man's exposed hand, revealing skin that was waxy, blue-tinged. He could almost smell the cold radiating from the body, an acrid, metallic tang that blended with the crisp pine.

"No obvious signs of trauma," Dr. Youngson confirmed, her head bent low. "Clothing undisturbed, no tears or defensive marks. Looks like he was placed here post-mortem, or died very, very peacefully." She straightened, looking at the toys. "And the ornamentation, how charming." There was a dry, almost bitter edge to her tone that Graham found oddly comforting.

"We're thinking exposure, then?" Miller asked, trying to sound professional but a hint of youthful bewilderment in his voice.

"Too early to say for sure," Dr. Youngson replied, pulling out a small thermometer to take the body's core temperature. "But the signs are certainly there. Hypothermia can be a quiet killer. The lack of struggle… the cold makes you numb, complacent. Sometimes they even start disrobing, paradoxically feeling warm before they go." She shone a penlight into the man's eyes, then gently tried to part his lips, looking for cyanosis.

Graham stepped closer, observing the meticulous care with which the toys had been placed. The red truck’s wheels were aligned perfectly with a crack in the ice underneath. The yellow duck faced the man’s head. The teddy bear, despite its missing eye, seemed to watch the scene with an unsettling, silent judgment. The killer hadn't just left a body; they had left a narrative. A quiet, unsettling story, told in frozen silence.

He squatted, ignoring the sharp cold seeping into his trousers. His fingers, stiff despite his gloves, brushed against the rough bark of a nearby pine tree. Little flecks of lichen clung to the bark, a tiny, resilient ecosystem against the brutal winter. He liked that. Small things persisting, changing slowly, imperceptibly. Not like this. This was a deliberate, violent shift.

He looked up at the sky. Still a uniform grey, but he could feel a subtle shift in the wind, a slight softening. The snow on the branches above seemed to shimmer, as if contemplating a slow, reluctant melt. The first thaw. He wondered if this crime, this strange, beautiful, terrifying thing, was a precursor to something else, something equally disruptive. Or if it was the disruption itself.

Dr. Youngson was taking samples now, carefully scraping tiny fragments of ice and snow into sterile bags. "Forensics will have a field day with this one," she commented, her voice muffled by her mask. "Pristine scene, strange elements. Lots to unpick. I'll need to get him back to the lab. Get him warmed up, literally, before I can tell you anything definitive."

Graham nodded, pushing himself back to his feet. The cold had settled deep into his bones now, a dull ache behind his knees. He scanned the tree line, tracing the path they’d taken in, the undisturbed snow beyond. No footprints apart from their own, no sign of struggle, no discarded tools. Just the victim, the toys, and the vast, silent winter. It was almost too neat, too perfect.

He turned his collar up against the wind, a shiver running deeper than the cold. This wasn't just a murder; it felt like a beginning, a deliberate crack in the world, and he had an unsettling certainty that the real game had only just started.

Unfinished Tales and Fun Short Stories to Read

The First Thaw is an unfinished fragment from the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories collection, an experimental, creative research project by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners Storytelling clubs. Each chapter is a unique interdisciplinary arts and narrative storytelling experiment, born from a collaboration between artists and generative AI, designed to explore the boundaries of creative writing, automation, and storytelling. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario.

By design, these stories have no beginning and no end. Many stories are fictional, but many others are not. They are snapshots from worlds that never fully exist, inviting you to imagine what comes before and what happens next. We had fun exploring this project, and hope you will too.