A Gaze Across the Salt Flats
The fist, when it came, was less a punch and more a blunt declaration. It connected with James's ribs, a dull thud that sent a fresh jolt of pain through the already aching bone. He doubled over, gasping, the taste of rust and dust thick in his mouth. Art, a man whose shoulders were as wide as a blacksmith's anvil, merely grunted, a sound of mild dissatisfaction.
"Still got some fight in you, boy," Art rasped, his voice like gravel in a tin can. "That's admirable. Foolish, but admirable."
Sandy, Art's leaner, quicker counterpart, leant against a warped support beam, picking at a splinter with a tarnished thumbnail. "We ain't got all day, James. The honour of your family name ain't worth a damn to us. The flour you 'borrowed' from the General Store, however, has a price."
"It wasn't borrowed!" James managed, straightening slowly, his hand pressed instinctively to his side. "Our crop failed. Pa swore he'd settle it once the new seeds took. A favour, that's all it was."
Sandy snorted, a dry, dismissive sound. "A favour? Old Man Hemlock don't do favours. He does transactions. And your pa ain't around to settle a thing, is he? Now, the agreement was, if the crop failed, your little homestead acts as collateral. Simple as that."
James's heart hammered against his bruised ribs. He knew this. Knew it in the marrow of his bones. Pa had been desperate, the land barren, the winter coming. Hemlock always found a way to sink his claws in. "You can't have it. It's all we have left."
Art stepped closer, his shadow falling over James like a shroud. "We're not here to argue the finer points of agricultural loans, boy. We're here to collect. And if you ain't got the coin, then the land it is. Simple, ain't it?"
He felt a familiar, cold dread begin to coil in his gut. This was it. The inevitable end of everything his family had built, everything his pa had sweated blood for. He looked past Art's hulking frame, past the dusty opening of the lean-to, towards the vast, indifferent expanse of the salt flats. The sky was a bleached white, the horizon a shimmering, endless line. And then, he saw him.
A Thread Among the Wires
He stood there, framed by the harsh, unfiltered light of the midday sun, a figure etched against the glaring white. He was slight, perhaps a year or two older than James, wearing a faded, well-worn denim jacket and a hat pulled low, obscuring his face. He hadn't moved. Just stood there, watching. He was a piece of the landscape, like a gnarled piece of scrub brush or a distant, unmoving rock.
Art and Sandy hadn't noticed him. Or perhaps they had, and simply dismissed him as another lost soul wandering the wastes, too insignificant to warrant attention. But James saw him, and for a long moment, their eyes met.
It wasn't a challenging gaze, not one of pity, nor even curiosity. It was something far more potent, more unsettling. An acknowledgement. A deep, silent recognition that cut through the fear and the pain, through the dust and the grime, settling somewhere raw and vulnerable in James's chest. The stranger's eyes, even from that distance, held a stillness, a depth that seemed to understand the very air James breathed, the heavy, hopeless air of his defeat. There was no judgment, only observation, a quiet, almost mournful comprehension.
The moment stretched, a fragile thread spun between them, taut and vibrating. The world outside that thread, the looming figures of Art and Sandy, the threat of losing everything, faded into a dull hum.
"Who's that?" Sandy finally muttered, following James's unwavering gaze. His voice snapped James back to the present, the thread threatening to break.
Art squinted, his massive hand shading his eyes. "Just some drifter. Mind your own business, boy." He turned his attention back to James, his face a mask of irritation. "Now, where were we? Oh yes. Your final offer. Or do we just take the deed and go?"
James tore his eyes from the stranger, a sudden, unfamiliar anger bubbling beneath the surface of his despair. "There is no offer! And there's no deed! Pa burnt it! Said no one would take his land!"
It was a lie, a desperate, childish fabrication. The deed was buried somewhere under the loose floorboards of their cabin, protected by a father's last, futile hope. But the words, once spoken, felt like a small act of rebellion, a spark against the dark. Art's eyes narrowed, a slow, dangerous anger building in their depths.
"Burnt it, did he?" Art rumbled, taking a step forward. "Well, then, we'll just have to burn the cabin down to prove your pa a liar, won't we? See how that suits you."
The threat, cold and direct, hung in the air. James flinched, picturing the small, wooden structure, the only place he'd ever known as home, consumed by flames. He was about to retort, to scream, to lash out, when a voice, quiet but clear, cut through the tension.
"He's not lying."
All three heads snapped towards the entrance. The drifter had moved. He was closer now, just a few paces from the lean-to's mouth. His hat was still low, but James could see the curve of a clean-shaven jaw, the faintest hint of a scar above his left eyebrow.
"And who in the bloody hell are you?" Art demanded, his bulk filling the opening, dwarfing the newcomer. "This ain't your business, vagrant."
"Perhaps not," the stranger replied, his voice calm, even, like stones skipping across still water. "But I heard the specifics of the 'agreement' from afar. Old Man Hemlock's debt claims only apply to the registered deed. No deed, no collateral. Common law, even out here."
Sandy scoffed. "Common law? We're a hundred miles from the nearest courthouse!"
"Still counts," the stranger said, shrugging slightly. It was a gesture of indifference, yet it held an odd authority. "Unless you're planning on a prolonged legal battle in Deadwood, which I doubt Hemlock would favour, considering the cost. And the… exposure."
The word 'exposure' hung in the air, weighted with unspoken implication. Art and Sandy exchanged a quick, uncertain glance. Hemlock operated in the grey areas, the shadows. Prolonged attention was the last thing he wanted.
"Look, we just need to collect what's owed," Art said, a flicker of hesitation in his tone. "The boy's father made a promise."
"A promise to be kept with a deed that no longer exists," the stranger countered, his gaze still steady. "A verbal contract without physical backing is… flimsy. Especially when the principal party is deceased."
James stared, completely bewildered. Who was this person? How did he know this? He was a phantom, a whisper of wind made solid, appearing from nowhere to speak words that carried an inexplicable weight.
The Stain of Unpaid Dust
Sandy, ever the more pragmatic of the two, stepped forward. "Alright, alright. So, what? We just walk away? Hemlock ain't gonna like that."
The stranger pushed his hat back slightly, revealing more of his face. His eyes, James realised, were a startling, clear grey, like storm clouds before a downpour. They were sharp, intelligent, and held a glint of something unreadable. "Hemlock always prefers to avoid trouble. A public dispute over a burnt deed, especially one involving a grieving family, might just draw the kind of attention he's so careful to avoid. Particularly from those federal marshals who've been poking around Leadville."
He mentioned the marshals casually, as if discussing the weather, but the effect was immediate. Art shifted uncomfortably. Sandy's jaw tightened. The marshals were a relatively new, unwelcome presence in the territory, their jurisdiction still hazy but their authority undeniable.
"You're bluffing," Art growled, but the conviction was lacking.
The stranger merely offered a faint, almost imperceptible tilt of his head. "Perhaps. Or perhaps not. The question is, are you willing to risk it for a claim that, legally, doesn't hold water? You could always go back to Hemlock and tell him the truth. The boy refused, cited a non-existent deed, and the risk of drawing attention was too high. He'll understand."
There was a shrewdness in his eyes, a complete understanding of how men like Hemlock operated. He wasn't advocating for James, not truly. He was merely pointing out the most advantageous, least problematic path for Art and Sandy.
After another tense moment, Art let out a frustrated sigh. "Fine!" he spat, kicking at a loose piece of timber. "You win this round, boy. But Hemlock don't forget. And he'll find another way. You mark my words."
He glared at James, then at the stranger, before turning on his heel. Sandy hesitated, casting a final, suspicious glance at the newcomer, then followed Art out into the blinding sun. Their heavy bootfalls receded quickly, leaving behind only the wind and the silence. The strange, profound silence.
James stood there, breath still hitched, muscles screaming, watching them go. He was free. For now. And then he turned, slowly, to face his unlikely saviour.
The stranger was still standing just outside the lean-to, looking out towards the horizon. He was taller than James, lean and wiry, like someone who had learnt to make do with little. He finally turned, his grey eyes meeting James's once more. The intensity was still there, but now, a flicker of something else, something softer, perhaps even a hint of concern, softened their depths.
"Thank you," James managed, his voice hoarse, raw with emotion. "I… I don't know who you are."
The stranger offered another small, almost imperceptible nod. "Konstantin." His voice was low, resonant, a surprising contrast to his quiet demeanour. "You'd best get out of here. Hemlock won't give up easily. And Art wasn't wrong, he doesn't forget."
"Where would I go?" James asked, the question escaping him like a desperate breath. His homestead was technically safe, but the reprieve was temporary. He couldn't stay. He couldn't wait for Hemlock's next move.
Konstantin surveyed him, his gaze lingering on the dirt and bruise on James's cheek. "You got family elsewhere? Friends?"
James shook his head, a fresh wave of despair washing over him. "Just Pa, and he's… gone. No one else. This land, it was everything."
Konstantin's eyes narrowed slightly, a thoughtful, calculating look. "Then you've got a choice. Run, and keep running. Or find a way to make yourself scarce until Hemlock forgets you. That's a long time out here."
"You seem to know a lot about Hemlock," James ventured, a faint suspicion mingling with his gratitude. "And… the law."
Konstantin's lips curved into the barest hint of a smile, a fleeting, almost melancholic expression. "I've seen enough of both. Now, your choice, boy. I'm heading east, towards the Black Hills. Plenty of places to disappear there. If you're quick, and quiet, you might just keep up."
The offer hung between them, stark and unexpected. A drifter, a stranger, offering a path. It wasn't an invitation, not really. More a statement of his own direction, with an implied opportunity.
James looked at Konstantin, at the lean figure, the grey eyes that held so much unspoken history. He had just saved him from losing everything, and now he was offering… what? A shared road to nowhere, or somewhere new? The prospect was terrifying, but the alternative was returning to an empty home, waiting for the inevitable.
"What about you?" James asked, stepping out into the sun-baked dirt, his boots crunching on the dried earth. "Why are you going to the Black Hills?"
Konstantin turned fully, his shoulders squaring. "Got my own reasons. Nothing that concerns you. Unless you're coming."
It wasn't a warm invitation. It was raw, honest, and utterly devoid of frills. And for some reason, in that desolate place, under that indifferent sky, James felt a strange pull, a sense of destiny stirring within him. He felt the weight of his own loneliness, the bitter taste of recent loss, and the sudden, surprising magnetic force of this quiet, enigmatic stranger.
"I'm coming," James said, the words surprising even himself. He took a hesitant step towards Konstantin, towards the vast, unknown East, towards whatever perilous future lay beyond the salt flats.
A Vulture's Promise
They walked in silence for a long while, the sun a relentless anvil above them, forging a path through the shimmering air. The sparse scrub offered little shade, the land stretching out, flat and endless, underfoot. James watched Konstantin's steady pace, the way his shoulders swayed almost imperceptibly with each step, the slight list to his right leg that suggested an old injury. Every movement was efficient, economical, a testament to a life lived hard and close to the bone.
"You said Hemlock won't give up," James finally broke the silence, his voice cracking slightly from disuse. "What else could he do?"
Konstantin didn't look back, his gaze fixed on the distant, hazy line of the horizon. "He could send others. Less particular than Art and Sandy. Or he could put your name out, a reward for information. You think you're safe now, you're not. You're just… delayed."
The grim honesty chilled James, a stark reminder of the reality he'd stepped into. "So, what do I do?"
"Learn to disappear," Konstantin replied, his voice flat. "Learn to make yourself useful. Learn to watch. And learn to not trust easy. Especially not men like Hemlock. Or me, for that matter."
The last part hung in the air, a quiet challenge. James looked at the back of Konstantin's head, at the strong, sun-darkened neck. Was he supposed to trust him? He had just risked himself to help James, yet his words carried a cynical edge, a warning.
"Why did you help me?" James asked, the question burning, needing an answer.
Konstantin finally stopped, turning slowly. The grey eyes met James's, and this time, there was a flash of something unreadable, a brief, exposed vulnerability, before it was masked again. "Didn't like the odds. Hemlock plays dirty. Needed to even the board." He paused, then added, almost as an afterthought, "And sometimes… sometimes you just gotta pick a side."
He turned again, continuing his steady walk, leaving James to ponder the vague, unsatisfactory answer. Pick a side. Had Konstantin just picked his? And if so, what kind of side was it? As they crested a low rise, James looked back. In the vast distance, a thin plume of smoke, black against the pale sky, began to unfurl from the direction of his old homestead. The lean-to, and the cabin beyond it, was alight. Art hadn't been bluffing after all. His home, everything he had, was gone, swallowed by the desert's indifferent maw. Konstantin had seen it too, he knew. And yet, he hadn't spoken, hadn't slowed his pace. The decision had been made for him, the only path now was forward, into the unknown, with this enigmatic stranger whose gaze had somehow claimed a part of his soul.
Unfinished Tales and Fun Short Stories to Read
A Gaze Across the Salt Flats is an unfinished fragment from the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories collection, an experimental, creative research project by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners Storytelling clubs. Each chapter is a unique interdisciplinary arts and narrative storytelling experiment, born from a collaboration between artists and generative AI, designed to explore the boundaries of creative writing, automation, and storytelling. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario.
By design, these stories have no beginning and no end. Many stories are fictional, but many others are not. They are snapshots from worlds that never fully exist, inviting you to imagine what comes before and what happens next. We had fun exploring this project, and hope you will too.