The Humiliation
The sun, already a brutal white disc in the pale morning sky, beat down on the 'Morning Solstice of Intent.' It wasn't even seven, and Cassidy's forehead was already slick with sweat. Across the manicured lawn, a ring of two dozen residents, all clad in loose-fitting, saffron-coloured tunics, held hands and swayed with an unsettling uniformity. Their faces, uniformly serene, reflected the early light. The air tasted of some herbal tea and the sickly sweet incense burning at the feet of a polished, vaguely abstract wooden sculpture—the 'Vessel of Collective Awakening,' according to the Enclave's welcome brochure. Cassidy resisted the urge to roll her eyes, instead focusing on her digital recorder, tucked deep into the folds of her oversized cargo shorts. She'd managed to get it past the gate guards, a small victory.
The Perforated Veil of Contentment
Elder Steve, a man whose silver hair seemed to radiate light, stepped to the centre of the swaying circle. His voice, amplified by a discreet microphone she couldn't locate, boomed with an almost theatrical resonance, cutting through the droning hum of an unseen generator. "Beloved Seekers! Another dawn graces our sacred Arcadian Enclave! A moment for true introspection! For the shedding of the corporeal anxieties that bind the unenlightened masses!" He paused, allowing his words to hang in the humid air, letting the collective sigh that rippled through the group settle. It was a practiced performance, every gesture, every intonation calibrated for maximum impact, for an audience that devoured it whole. Cassidy scribbled in a small notebook, feigning disinterest in the ritual unfolding before her. The graphite felt gritty against the cheap paper.
A young woman, no older than Cassidy herself, perhaps twenty, stumbled slightly in the swaying rhythm. Her eyes, briefly, met Cassidy's. There was a flicker there, a transient spark of something other than the enforced placidity. Discomfort, maybe. Or a question. Then, as quickly as it appeared, it was gone, subsumed by the required, gentle swaying. This was Lorelei, Cassidy remembered from the brief orientation yesterday – one of the longer-term residents, praised for her 'deep commitment to the Enclave's principles.'
"Today," Elder Steve continued, his voice modulating to a more intimate, yet still booming, cadence, "we cleanse. We purge the remnants of external contamination! We embrace the absolute purity of shared experience! For it is in our unity that true enlightenment blossoms, like the rare Orchids of Contemplation in our very own hothouses!" He gestured grandly towards a series of gleaming, dome-shaped structures nestled further into the treeline, barely visible through the thick summer foliage. The 'hothouses' were suspiciously modern for a place that touted organic, rustic simplicity.
Later, as the Enclave's inhabitants dispersed for their 'Creative Expression Hours,' Cassidy found herself wandering towards the edge of the central compound. The path was uneven, loose gravel shifting under her worn trainers. A faint smell, something vaguely metallic, drifted from the direction of the hothouses. She heard the distant, rhythmic thud of a pump. The Enclave, with its meticulously planned 'natural' aesthetic, seemed to be perpetually under construction, or rather, *de*construction of the exterior world, meticulously replacing it with its own curated version of nature. The only thing genuinely natural here, Cassidy thought, was the oppressive summer heat and the unrelenting drone of insects.
Lorelei appeared beside her, startling her. "Are you, um, finding your way?" Her voice was quiet, almost a whisper, a stark contrast to the Elder's pronouncements. She clutched a small, woven basket. "The Elder suggests new guests orient themselves by reflecting upon the Great Tree of Knowledge. It is… most inspiring."
Cassidy gave a tight, practiced smile. "Indeed. Just exploring the perimeter, taking it all in. Such… commitment." She paused, testing the waters. "The Orchids of Contemplation, for example. Truly remarkable, given the climate." Her gaze drifted towards the hothouses, a casual gesture. Lorelei's eyes followed, then darted back to Cassidy, a flicker of that earlier disquiet returning. Her lips pressed together, a moment of visible hesitation.
"They are a… marvel of dedication," Lorelei said, choosing her words with noticeable care, a theatrical formality that felt out of place for someone her age. "Our horticultural team, led by Elder Steve himself, dedicates countless hours to their… flourishing. A testament to our mastery over earthly limitations." There was a brittle quality to her tone, like dry leaves. She shifted her weight, kicking at a loose pebble. "Are you enjoying your immersion, then? The full Arcadian experience?" There was a subtle emphasis on 'full,' almost imperceptible, but Cassidy caught it.
"It's certainly… unique," Cassidy offered, deliberately vague. "I'm a reporter, you see. For the 'Unseen Truths' blog. Always seeking unique communities, fresh perspectives. A chance to truly understand what drives people towards… alternative living." She watched Lorelei closely. "And what drove you, Lorelei? What brought you to this particular sanctuary?"
Lorelei’s gaze drifted to the distant, shimmering heat haze above the fields beyond the Enclave’s fences. "A search for… authenticity," she replied, her voice gaining a forced strength, as if reciting a well-rehearsed line. "A desire to escape the… superficiality of the exterior world. Here, one finds… true purpose. True connection." Her hands, however, were clenching and unclenching the straps of her basket, a small, nervous tic. Her pronouncements felt like a script she was tired of performing.
"And have you found it?" Cassidy pressed, her tone gentle but persistent. The humidity clung to her skin, making the quiet exchange feel charged. A fly buzzed lazily past her ear, an insignificant detail that somehow amplified the tension.
"One is always on the journey, is one not?" Lorelei answered, deflecting with a rhetorical flourish that was pure Steve. Her eyes, however, held a weary resignation that spoke volumes. "The path to self-discovery is… arduous. Filled with trials. But the rewards… the collective rewards are immeasurable."
Cassidy spent the afternoon attempting to speak to other residents, but encountered only polite, well-rehearsed platitudes. Everyone spoke in similar, almost poetic turns of phrase, espousing the Enclave's virtues with a uniformity that bordered on the uncanny. It was like interviewing a hive mind, a collective consciousness where individuality had been meticulously sandpapered away. There was no real insight, no off-the-cuff remarks, just a litany of pre-approved statements about spiritual growth and sustainable living. Her recorder, she feared, was capturing nothing but a carefully constructed echo chamber.
By evening, the temperature had barely dropped. A thin layer of dust covered everything, kicked up by the residents walking to the 'Dining Hall of Sustenance.' Elder Steve, presiding over the main table, announced the evening's main event. "Tonight, beloved Seekers! A special experience! The Purification of the Mundane!" His smile was broad, almost predatory. "We shall divest ourselves of the accumulated detritus of the external world, not merely spiritually, but physically! A symbolic purging! Let all who wish to truly embrace the Arcadian ethos gather at the cleansing pools at the third chime of the moon bell!" There was a murmur of excited anticipation, a ripple through the saffron robes. Lorelei, seated far from the Elder, kept her head down, picking at her meal with a noticeable lack of enthusiasm.
Cassidy felt a prickle of unease. 'Purification of the Mundane' sounded ominously vague. And physical purging? She imagined some kind of forced, ritualistic dunking, or worse. The thought made her stomach clench. She decided against partaking. Instead, she slipped away after dinner, using the cover of twilight and the general buzz of preparation for the 'purification' to make her way towards the hothouses. The metallic scent was stronger here, mixed with something earthy and damp, like disturbed soil.
She found a small, overgrown path, barely visible, leading around the largest dome. The ground was muddy, slick under her shoes. A generator hummed persistently nearby, a mechanical heartbeat beneath the Enclave's manufactured tranquility. Peeking through a gap in the thick, opaque plastic of the dome, Cassidy saw not orchids, but row upon row of genetically identical crops, lit by an array of harsh, purple LED lights. Hydroponic systems hummed and dripped, nutrient-rich solutions flowing through intricate pipe networks. It was a high-tech agricultural operation, not the artisanal, sun-drenched gardens advertised in the brochures. A stark, cold reality against the Enclave's warm, organic façade.
And there, among the whirring fans and glowing tubes, were three individuals in protective suits, working with chemical sprayers. They moved with a detached efficiency, utterly devoid of the 'mindful presence' so ardently preached by Elder Steve. One of them, a bulky figure whose face was obscured by a respirator, seemed to be directing the others. The man pointed to a row of plants, then to a large, industrial-sized tank labelled, starkly, 'Yield-Max Nutrient Blend.' The entire operation was a carefully hidden, deeply cynical contradiction to everything the Arcadian Enclave purported to be. The irony, bitter and sharp, caught in Cassidy's throat. Her 'eye-opening story' had just found its chilling core.
She pulled back, heart thudding against her ribs, the humid night air suddenly feeling impossibly cold. The drone of the generator, the distant, muffled chimes announcing the 'purification,' all converged into a dissonant symphony of deception. She had found her truth, but now she had to figure out how to expose it without becoming another silenced component of the Enclave’s manufactured harmony. A twig snapped nearby. Cassidy froze, breath caught in her lungs, pressing herself against the damp wall of the hothouse. Had she been seen? The shadows shifted, deep and formless, and the hum of the systems felt like the beat of a monstrous, indifferent heart. Her hand instinctively went to the recorder, a cold comfort against her palm. What if 'purification' meant more than just a symbolic purging of the mundane? What if it meant a purging of inconvenient truths, and those who sought them?
Unfinished Tales and Fun Short Stories to Read
The Humiliation is an unfinished fragment from the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories collection, an experimental, creative research project by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners Storytelling clubs. Each chapter is a unique interdisciplinary arts and narrative storytelling experiment, born from a collaboration between artists and generative AI, designed to explore the boundaries of creative writing, automation, and storytelling. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario.
By design, these stories have no beginning and no end. Many stories are fictional, but many others are not. They are snapshots from worlds that never fully exist, inviting you to imagine what comes before and what happens next. We had fun exploring this project, and hope you will too.