The Threadbare Clue

by Eva Suluk

The ground was slick, a veneer of fine, autumn-greased muck over ancient cobblestones. My boot caught on something unyielding, something that wasn't supposed to be there, and I lurched forward, arms flailing in a desperate, clumsy ballet against the cold brick. A sharp pain bloomed across my palm as I scraped it against the rough mortar, a sudden, involuntary gasp escaping me, not from the sting, but from the jarring proximity to the filth. The smell of damp moss and something vaguely metallic, like old coins left out in the rain, filled my nostrils.

My eyes, still adjusting to the meagre light that bled into this particular forgotten artery of the city, scanned the ground. What had been the offending obstacle? Not a brick, nor a loose grate. It was small, no bigger than my thumb, and dark against the grey-brown grime. A curiosity, you understand, a compulsion born of an insatiable need to understand the overlooked minutiae. I knelt, wincing as my knee connected with a particularly sharp stone, and pushed aside a handful of wet, decomposing sycamore leaves. There, nestled amongst the grit and forgotten crisp packets, lay a tarnished piece of silver. A locket, I deduced, its surface dull, yet catching the scant ambient light with a faint, almost shy glint.

Beside it, somewhat overshadowed by its unexpected presence, rested a discarded cigarette packet. It was a peculiar shade of dark green, almost black, emblazoned with a minimalist, art deco-esque design of a bat in flight against a crescent moon. 'Nocturne Noir,' the elegant script declared. And then, the true obscenity: a single, dark smear, unmistakably dried blood, clung to the paper, just beneath the brand name. My fingers, still smarting from the scrape, hesitated before I reached for the locket. It was cold, unnervingly so, and heavier than its diminutive size suggested. Its weight settled in my palm with a distinct gravity, a tangible burden.

I flipped it open, my thumb worrying at the tiny clasp. The hinges gave with a dry, almost inaudible click. Inside, instead of the expected faded photograph, was nothing but a dull, silver-grey interior. Yet, as I angled it, allowing a sliver of the distant streetlamp’s sickly yellow glow to fall upon it, I discerned something. Not a photograph, no. Something etched, incredibly fine, almost invisible to the casual glance. A series of symbols, perhaps? Or merely decorative filigree? The light was too poor, my vision too strained.

A sound, then. A faint rustle, like a startled rat scrambling deeper into the refuse, but somehow… different. Too deliberate, too heavy. It pulled my attention from the silver artefact. My head snapped up, straining to pierce the deeper gloom further down the alley, where the brick walls converged into an indistinguishable maw. A shiver, not solely from the autumnal chill, traced its way up my spine. The air, already thick with the scent of damp decay, now seemed to press in, dense with unseen eyes.

My heart began a frantic, erratic drumming against my ribs. The journalist in me, the aspiring chronicler of urban obscurity, urged me to linger, to observe, to document. But the primal instinct for self-preservation, often dismissed by the ambitious, screamed for immediate withdrawal. I made a swift decision. The locket and the cigarette packet, both, disappeared into the inner pocket of my worn canvas jacket, sliding against the already accumulated detritus of notebooks and forgotten pens. My movements were less a retreat and more a controlled flight, my feet finding purchase on the uneven stones with an urgency that bordered on panic.

The alley spat me out onto a bustling thoroughfare, the sudden cacophony of traffic and human chatter a jarring assault on my senses. The streetlights, bless their electric hearts, felt like a warm embrace. My hand still throbbed, a small, inconsequential injury now overshadowed by the strange, insistent weight of the locket in my pocket. I kept my head down, merging with the flow of pedestrians, my eyes darting, searching for any lingering gaze, any figure that might have followed. There was none, or at least, none I could detect.


The Tarnished Truth

My apartment, a cramped one-bedroom dwelling above a perpetually humming laundromat, offered a dubious sanctuary. The air inside, thick with the scent of old books and instant coffee, was a welcome change from the alley’s putrid breath. I peeled off my jacket, tossing it onto the armchair, then pulled out the two items. They seemed less sinister under the harsh, bare bulb of my desk lamp, yet no less enigmatic.

The cigarette packet first. 'Nocturne Noir.' I turned it over in my fingers, noting the texture of the paper, the specific shade of green. The blood, now dry and crusty, seemed even more stark under direct light. A small, almost imperceptible dent in the side suggested it had been crushed, perhaps in a struggle, or simply trodden underfoot. I noted the details with the meticulous precision of a forensic scientist, though my experience extended no further than late-night crime documentaries.

Then the locket. I placed it gently on a sheet of clean printer paper, its tarnished surface reflecting the desk lamp's glow like a distant, dying star. The etching, I now saw with greater clarity, was not filigree. It was a series of symbols, undeniably. Not letters, not numbers, at least not in any alphabet I recognised. They were intricate, almost geometric, interwoven with thin, delicate lines that suggested a hidden pattern. Like a code, perhaps. Or a very obscure set of initials. It felt… significant. My mind, a perpetual sieve of obscure facts and half-formed theories, churned.

I took a soft cloth, dampening it slightly, and began to gently polish the locket. The grime gave way slowly, revealing glimpses of brighter silver beneath. As more of the surface cleaned, the symbols became sharper, their lines more pronounced. There were three distinct symbols, arranged in a triangular pattern. One resembled a stylised eye within a crescent. Another, a jagged, almost lightning-bolt shape. The third, a flowing, serpentine line that seemed to coil around itself. They felt ancient, yet somehow… industrial. An unsettling contradiction.

A search engine, the modern oracle, was my next stop. 'Nocturne Noir cigarettes,' I typed, the keys clicking softly in the quiet room. The results were immediate, and illuminating. It was a limited-edition, artisanal brand, produced by a boutique tobacco company in Eastern Europe. Expensive. Cult following. Often favoured by artists, musicians, and, interestingly, a certain subset of the city’s affluent, 'alternative' youth. A common thread in online forums mentioned their scarcity, their unique flavour profile, and their status as a subtle badge of membership within exclusive social circles.

A prickle of recognition, then, cold and swift. Nadiya. Nadiya Petrov. The name surfaced from the recesses of my memory, unbidden. A fellow university student, a year older than I, studying fine arts. She had gone missing three weeks prior. The initial police reports had been vague, standard missing person bulletins. No foul play suspected, they said. She was merely 'voluntarily absent.' But whispers had begun to circulate amongst the student body, whispers of debt, of unsavoury connections, of a sudden, unexplained silence. And now, the cigarettes. I recalled seeing a photo on a mutual friend's social media, Nadiya, laughing, holding a very distinctive, dark-green cigarette packet. It was 'Nocturne Noir.' The coincidence felt too stark, too precise to be mere happenstance.

My hands trembled slightly as I navigated to the local news archives, searching for Nadiya's disappearance. The articles were sparse, mostly reiterating the police’s official line. A brief mention of her 'social circle,' an enigmatic phrase that now took on a darker, more concrete meaning. The missing poster, a solemn image of her smiling face, stared back at me from the screen. She had a small, almost imperceptible scar above her left eyebrow, and a habit of wearing silver jewellery. My gaze dropped to the locket, still reflecting the lamp's glow. Could it be hers? The scar, the silver… the cigarette packet. Too many threads, weaving into a single, unsettling knot.

The room seemed to shrink around me, the familiar comfort of my sanctuary replaced by a sudden, oppressive weight of responsibility. This was no longer just a curious find in a dirty alley. This was a direct, tangible link to a missing person, a puzzle piece that the authorities, perhaps, had overlooked or simply dismissed. The thought thrilled me, a perverse sort of adrenaline surge, but also terrified me. What if the 'unseen eyes' in the alley had been more than just a figment of my overactive imagination? What if someone else knew about this locket, and was looking for it?


Echoes in the Web

The internet, a vast ocean of information and misinformation, became my primary tool. I cross-referenced the symbols on the locket. No direct matches for ancient cultures, no obvious occult significance. But then, a forum. Obscure, tucked away in the darker corners of a site dedicated to urban legends and unsolved mysteries. A thread, several years old, discussing a local, semi-secret artistic collective. They called themselves 'The Serpent's Eye.' Their insignia? A stylised eye within a crescent, a jagged line, and a coiling serpent. The very symbols etched onto the locket. My breath caught.

The collective, as the forum posts alleged, was less an artistic endeavour and more a clandestine social club, attracting individuals who thrived on exclusivity and a certain disregard for conventional morality. Whispers of lavish, secret parties, illicit activities, and a charismatic, enigmatic leader who went by the moniker 'The Architect.' Nadiya, with her artistic aspirations and her penchant for the city’s underground scene, fit the profile almost too perfectly. The 'Nocturne Noir' cigarettes, a signifier of belonging, clicked into place.

I scrolled through the forum, devouring every scrap of information, every rumour, every unverified claim. The collective had a reputation for drawing people in, then making them disappear from their former lives. Not always violently, the forum claimed, but thoroughly. A new identity, a new purpose, or so the more romanticised accounts suggested. Others hinted at something far more sinister, at coercion, exploitation, and a network that ran deeper than anyone suspected. The blood on the cigarette packet… it spoke a different story than mere 'voluntary absence.'

My resolve hardened. This was more than a mere journalistic scoop; it felt like a moral imperative. Nadiya deserved more than a dismissal. And I, Martin, with my penchant for digging where I ought not, suddenly found myself inextricably entangled in her narrative. The cold, logical part of my brain, trained to dissect facts, warred with a rising tide of apprehension. What precisely had I stumbled into? A discarded memento, or a breadcrumb leading into a very real, very dangerous maze?

The night wore on, the hum of the laundromat below a constant, distant thrum. I traced the symbols on the locket with my finger, the silver now gleaming faintly. The eye, the lightning, the serpent. Each seemed to pulse with a silent question, daring me to seek the answer. Sleep felt like an indulgence, an irresponsible retreat. I needed to know more, to find where these threads led. The alley had given me a clue, but it had also, perhaps, given me a target.

I would return. Not to the alley itself, not yet. But to the periphery, to the places where 'The Serpent's Eye' was rumoured to convene, where the affluent youth sought their illicit thrills. The scent of damp leaves and distant rain still clung to my jacket, a reminder of my discovery, a lingering coldness that promised autumn's unforgiving truth. My phone, cold against my ear, displayed Nadiya's missing poster. Her eyes, in that grainy image, seemed to plead for an explanation.

My next move needed precision. I couldn't blunder in. The formal theatricality of this strange world, where symbols held sway and expensive cigarettes marked allegiance, required careful navigation. I pulled up a map of the city, highlighting the areas mentioned in the forum posts. The old industrial district, gentrifying but still possessing its grimy underbelly. A cluster of art galleries and late-night cafés known for their 'exclusive' clientele. My gaze lingered on a defunct warehouse, its façade adorned with what looked like a faded mural of an eye within a crescent. A coincidence, or a signpost? The mystery deepened, demanding I follow its labyrinthine paths. The cold silver of the locket felt heavy in my palm, a promise, or perhaps, a warning.

Unfinished Tales and Fun Short Stories to Read

The Threadbare Clue is an unfinished fragment from the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories collection, an experimental, creative research project by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners Storytelling clubs. Each chapter is a unique interdisciplinary arts and narrative storytelling experiment, born from a collaboration between artists and generative AI, designed to explore the boundaries of creative writing, automation, and storytelling. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario.

By design, these stories have no beginning and no end. Many stories are fictional, but many others are not. They are snapshots from worlds that never fully exist, inviting you to imagine what comes before and what happens next. We had fun exploring this project, and hope you will too.