The Stutter of Brick Dust

by Leaf Richards

Mike felt the cold seep through the thin denim of his jeans as he knelt. His fingers, already stiff from the spring chill, fumbled with the rusted edge of the drain cover. It groaned, a mournful sound that seemed to carry the weight of all the city's discarded secrets. Beside him, Patricia had a small, almost imperceptible tremor in her hand as she pointed with a graphite pencil. 'There. Just under the lip. A slight discoloration. Not rust. More… organic. Crimson, almost.'

He pushed, muscles complaining, and the grate shifted, grinding against decades of accumulated grime. A noxious scent, a blend of stagnant water and something vaguely metallic, wafted up. Mike recoiled, bumping his elbow hard against the damp brick. He grunted, rubbing the ache. Down in the narrow trench, half-obscured by sodden leaves and discarded takeaway containers, sat a small, leather-bound sketchbook. Its cover, once a rich brown, was now mottled with dark, damp stains, looking like an ancient, forgotten wound.

'Harry's,' Patricia murmured, a catch in her voice. Her gaze, usually so sharp and unwavering, softened, then hardened again with a professional resolve. She produced a pair of latex gloves from her jacket pocket, pulling them on with precise, deliberate movements. 'This is not, by any estimation, an auspicious development, Mike. The sheer audacity of leaving this here… it almost feels a deliberate provocation.'

'A provocation, or a desperate cry, Patricia?' Mike countered, leaning closer, peering into the gloom. 'Harry was never one for subtlety, but this… this feels different. More desperate. More urgent.' His mind flickered, associative and uncontrolled, to the last time he’d seen Harry – pale, wild-eyed, muttering about 'patterns' and 'the unseen current'. He’d dismissed it then, another artistic eccentricity. Now, the memory stung like a slapped cheek.

Patricia carefully extracted the sketchbook, holding it as if it were a fragile, explosive device. Its pages were warped by moisture, some stuck together, others rippling like disturbed water. She fanned them open, and the faint, familiar smell of charcoal and ink, mixed with the damp decay of the alley, rose. His stomach gave a queer lurch. The first few pages were familiar, classic Harry: hyper-realistic street scenes, architectural details, faces captured with an almost brutal honesty. Then, the alteration began.


The Unravelling Line

The detailed drawings of ordinary city life began to warp. A bus shelter morphed into a skeletal cage. A smiling pedestrian’s face was obscured by frantic, scribbled lines, a mask of terror. Mike recognised the building on one page, a nondescript office block they’d passed countless times. In Harry’s hand, it now seemed to pulse, its windows like vacant eyes, a network of thin, almost invisible tendrils snaking from its foundations into the asphalt.

'What in Hades is this?' Mike muttered, leaning over Patricia’s shoulder, his breath warm on her ear. She stiffened but did not move. Her gloved finger traced one of the spectral lines. 'A descent, perhaps. Or an uncovering. The progression from realistic rendering to… this, is quite pronounced.' She turned a page, and a small, folded piece of paper, thick and parchment-like, fell out onto the wet asphalt.

Mike snatched it up before the drizzle could claim it. It was a single, cryptic sentence, written in Harry’s distinctive, elegant hand: 'The network binds beyond the visible; the spring thaw brings the rot to light.' No signature, no date. Just that. He read it aloud, the words sounding hollow and dramatic in the cold alley air. Patricia shook her head, a strand of dark hair escaping her hood and clinging to her cheek.

'He was obsessed with hidden symmetries, wasn't he?' Patricia recalled, her gaze distant, reflecting the dull streetlamp. 'He spoke of an underlying logic to urban chaos. But never… never with this particular tenor of dread.' She carefully turned more pages, her expression growing increasingly solemn. 'These figures… they resemble the ones from his later abstract period, but now they are intertwined with his realist work. They are everywhere, watching, observing, orchestrating.'

Mike recalled Harry’s increasingly erratic behaviour in the weeks leading up to his disappearance. The artist, known for his vibrant energy, had become a ghost, his clothes rumpled, his eyes haunted. He’d talked in riddles, about 'seeing through the façade,' about 'the system's pulse beneath the paving stones.' They had put it down to artistic angst, the pressure of an upcoming gallery showing. What foolish, naïve assumptions they had made. The melancholy that had settled on Harry had been a premonition, a creeping, insidious dread that had finally consumed him.

'He called them the ‘Overseers’,' Mike remembered, a chill unrelated to the weather tracing his spine. 'Abstract concepts, he’d said. Forces that shape the city. He sketched them endlessly. Faceless, formless entities. But here… here they seem to have found a physical manifestation.' The drawings were grotesque, distorted reflections of human forms, subtly integrated into the architecture, observing from shadows, their limbs stretching like tendrils to connect disparate points on the map.


A Thread of Grime

Patricia finished her inspection of the sketchbook, carefully placing it into an evidence bag she produced from her pocket. 'This is not merely a record of a deteriorating mind, Mike. This is a testament. A confession, perhaps. Or a warning.' She stood, brushing debris from her trousers, then knelt again, her eyes scanning the immediate area where the sketchbook had been found. Her movements were precise, a dancer’s grace in an ungraceful setting.

Her gaze fixed on a particular brick, one slightly darker than its neighbours, nestled amongst a cluster of weeds pushing defiantly through a crack. 'Here,' she said, her voice barely a whisper. 'Look closely.' Mike bent down again. There, almost invisible to the casual eye, etched crudely into the brick face, was a symbol. Three interlocking triangles, forming a distorted star, with a single, elongated eye in the centre. It was raw, amateurish, yet oddly disturbing. It resembled a motif that had appeared in the margins of Harry’s later, more abstract works.

'What is it?' Mike asked, feeling a prickle of apprehension. He felt a shiver of spring air, suddenly colder, against the back of his neck. The symbol was familiar, though he couldn’t place it. A fleeting memory of Harry showing him a crude carving on a wall, dismissing it as 'local graffiti' floated through his mind. Was Harry trying to tell them something even then?

'I do not know,' Patricia admitted, a rare flicker of uncertainty in her eyes. 'But it is new. Or, at the very least, recently exposed. The lichen has not yet taken hold within its grooves.' She pulled out her phone, snapping a series of close-up photographs, her journalistic instincts overriding any personal trepidation. The faint aroma of budding magnolias, carried on a gust from a nearby park, briefly cut through the alley's stench, a fragile promise of beauty in the squalor.

As she straightened, a subtle sound, a shuffle of movement from the far end of the alley, caught their attention. Mike’s head snapped up, his eyes straining through the damp gloom. A figure, silhouetted against the weak light from the main street, stood motionless, half-obscured by a overflowing dumpster. It was impossible to discern any features, only the undeniable presence of someone watching. A cold, hard knot formed in Mike’s stomach.

Patricia’s hand instinctively went to her pocket, her knuckles white. She did not speak, her gaze locked on the figure. The silence stretched, thick and suffocating, broken only by the drip of water from a broken pipe and the distant rumble of the city. The figure remained still, an ominous statue, before slowly, deliberately, melting back into the deeper shadows.

'Did you… did you see that?' Mike asked, his voice barely audible, his throat suddenly dry. He felt a profound sense of intrusion, a cold violation. His internal thoughts raced, a jumble of fear, adrenaline, and a sudden, sharp clarity: they were not alone in this investigation. They were being watched. And Harry's disappearance was not a solitary incident, a single thread, but part of a much larger, darker tapestry.

Patricia merely nodded, her face grim. She pulled another item from the sketchbook – a small, crumpled piece of paper, folded many times. It was a fragment of Harry’s journal. She unfolded it carefully, revealing faint, almost illegible script. '…they know. I saw one. Its eyes… not human. The Overseers are real. They move among us. I think… they will silence me. The alley… I must leave the key… for those who follow. The truth will be in the patterns. The spring will show the lines… I am not safe…'

The rain began again, a light, insistent patter that amplified the chill. Mike looked from the grim words to the damp, shadowed end of the alley where the figure had been. The new growth of spring, usually a symbol of hope, felt menacing here, a cover for hidden things. He had dismissed Harry's wild theories as the ravings of an overstimulated mind. Now, standing in this cold, forgotten corner of the city, with a crumpled note warning of 'Overseers' and 'unhuman eyes,' he felt a chilling certainty. Harry hadn't been raving. He had been seeing. And someone, or something, had not wanted him to reveal those visions. Patricia’s eyes met his, wide with dawning horror and understanding. They had just stumbled into something far more dangerous than a simple missing person's case.


A distant siren wailed, a mournful sound that seemed to underscore their grim discovery. Patricia clutched the journal fragment, her fingers white around the delicate paper. 'This means…' she began, her voice trailing off, her gaze sweeping the desolate alley, as if expecting the shadowy figure to reappear. 'This means we are now implicated. We are now within their purview.' Mike could only nod, a cold, dread certainty settling over him. He felt the invisible threads Harry had spoken of, tightening around them. The spring thaw was indeed bringing rot to light, and they were caught in its grim, unwelcome bloom.

Unfinished Tales and Fun Short Stories to Read

The Stutter of Brick Dust is an unfinished fragment from the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories collection, an experimental, creative research project by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners Storytelling clubs. Each chapter is a unique interdisciplinary arts and narrative storytelling experiment, born from a collaboration between artists and generative AI, designed to explore the boundaries of creative writing, automation, and storytelling. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario.

By design, these stories have no beginning and no end. Many stories are fictional, but many others are not. They are snapshots from worlds that never fully exist, inviting you to imagine what comes before and what happens next. We had fun exploring this project, and hope you will too.