The Chill Mark
The air tasted of exhaust and wet concrete, a familiar winter blend Kenneth had long ceased to notice. He kicked at a broken beer bottle, the glass skittering across the grimy pavement with a thin, metallic whine. His breath plumed out in ragged clouds, disappearing into the perpetual gloom of the alleyway. It was colder than he’d thought, the kind of cold that seeped into your bones, not just your coat. His fingers, jammed into his pockets, felt numb despite the worn wool lining.
He wasn't meant to be here, not really. Bethany had insisted on a 'shortcut,' a term she used for any route that involved jumping fences or navigating derelict spaces. They were late for some mandatory college orientation, which felt like a cosmic joke given the weight of the city pressing down on them. A loose brick, frosted with a thin layer of rime, crunched under his boot. He glanced up, past the tangled web of fire escapes, to the narrow strip of bruised sky. Almost evening, already. The streetlights, far above, would start flickering on soon, painting the grey with sickly orange.
Bethany, a few paces ahead, was already crouched beside a dumpster, her gloved hand brushing aside a sodden newspaper. "Look," she mumbled, her voice muffled by the scarf pulled high over her chin. "Here." Kenneth sighed, shifting his weight. She had a habit of finding things. Not treasures, not usually. More often, it was discarded detritus, forgotten stories, or, like now, something that just felt… off.
He ambled closer, pulling his hands free, the cold stinging his knuckles. Bethany pointed, her finger a dark silhouette against the brickwork. There, almost at ground level, beneath a sagging window boarded up with plywood, was a mark. Not graffiti, not really. It wasn't painted. It was etched, or somehow imprinted, directly into the ancient mortar. A circle, imperfectly rendered, with three radiating lines, almost like a crude claw print, or a stylized star. It shimmered faintly, a weak, almost imperceptible greenish-blue luminescence, like a dying ember in the twilight. The light pulsed, almost a heartbeat, slow and uneven.
"What is it?" Kenneth asked, his voice flatter than he intended. He knelt beside her, his knees protesting. The luminescence was cool to the touch, not warm like he'd expected. It felt like cool glass, smooth against his fingertip. The smell of damp moss and something metallic, like old pennies, seemed stronger here.
Bethany traced the edge of the mark with her own finger, a frown pulling at her brow. "I don't know. Saw something similar once, online. Old city legend. Something about… forgotten doorways." She scoffed, a quick, dismissive sound that didn't quite reach her eyes. Her gaze was fixed on the symbol, rapt. "But it was always a drawing. Not… this. This is… actual light."
Ozzie, lagging behind as usual, finally caught up. He wore a heavy, patched-up parka, the hood pulled so far forward it almost obscured his glasses. He always looked a bit like a startled owl. He didn't speak, just knelt down next to them, pulling a small, battered device from his inner pocket. It looked like an old multimeter, but with a small, glowing screen and a tangle of wires terminating in a flat, metallic sensor pad.
He pressed the pad against the glowing mark. The screen on his device flickered, digits scrolling rapidly. His brow furrowed. "This isn't… nothing," he murmured, his voice soft, almost swallowed by the alley's hush. "Low-level energy signature. Unstable flux. Substance is… complex. Not paint. Not luminous dye. Inorganic, mostly. Trace organics, oddly enough, but not biological."
Kenneth frowned. "Trace organics? So, like… someone bled on it?" The thought made his stomach lurch. He rubbed his numb fingers. The cold felt different now, sharper, more insistent.
Ozzie shook his head. "No, no. Not a blood-type organic. More like… a residual. Like a fingerprint left on a microscopic scale, but from something not… human. Or not entirely. It's too diffuse, too… odd."
Bethany sat back on her heels, her gaze sweeping the grimy brickwork around the mark. "Forgotten doorways," she repeated, the earlier scoff gone. "The legend always said they appeared in places where the city forgot. Where the old bones of it still hummed beneath the new." She paused, her eyes narrowing. "Remember that old article, from the university archives? About the 'Anomalous Glows of the Northern Quarter'? Everyone dismissed it as urban myth, kids messing with glow paint."
"This isn't glow paint," Kenneth stated, definitively. He knew glow paint. He knew its sickly sweet smell, its plastic texture. This was something else. The cold emanating from it felt ancient, heavy. It made the small hairs on his arms stand up.
Echoes from the Margins
Ozzie adjusted his glasses, his fingers still working the controls on his device. "The energy signature… it’s intermittent. Almost like it's responding to something. Or someone." He tilted his head, listening. The only sound was the drip of the icicle and the distant city sigh.
"Responding to what?" Kenneth asked. He felt a prickle of unease begin to bloom in his chest, a sensation he usually avoided. His gaze drifted upwards again, scanning the dark windows of the abandoned building opposite. Every pane was like a black eye, watching. The thought was stupid, but it stuck.
Bethany pushed herself to her feet, her boots scraping against the loose gravel. She began to walk slowly along the wall, her eyes meticulously cataloguing every crack, every faded poster fragment, every patch of peeling render. Her journalistic instincts, sharp and unyielding, were fully engaged. "The stories always talked about 'finders,'" she said, her voice a low murmur. "People who stumble upon these things. And then… they disappear. Or they see things. Hear things."
"Bethany, don't," Kenneth warned, a chill entirely unrelated to the weather tracing a line down his spine. "It's probably just some weird chemical reaction. Old industrial residue. This whole area was a tannery once, right?" He tried to inject logic, normalcy, into the situation. But the faint green-blue thrum of the symbol undermined every attempt.
Ozzie grunted, not looking up from his device. "No known industrial chemical matches this spectral signature. And the energy flux… it's not random. It has a rhythm, however broken." His finger hovered over a button. "I'm going to try a broader scan. See if there's an origin point nearby."
He pressed the button. The device emitted a low, almost subsonic hum, a sound more felt than heard. The green-blue glow on the brick wall pulsed in response, brighter this time, a slow, deliberate inhale and exhale of light. The alley seemed to deepen, the shadows lengthening and growing denser, as if drawing inward. A sudden, sharp blast of wind whipped through the narrow space, carrying with it the smell of damp earth and something acrid, almost burnt. Kenneth shivered, pulling his collar tighter.
A small, almost imperceptible sound reached them then, from deeper in the alley, near where the brick wall turned a sharp corner into an even darker recess. It was a scrape, a soft dragging noise, like something heavy being moved. Or something trying to move. Kenneth froze, his head snapping towards the sound. "Did you hear that?" he whispered, his voice catching in his throat.
Bethany had heard it too. Her head cocked, her eyes wide, no longer dismissive or analytical. Just… alert. Ozzie, still crouched, lowered his device, his gaze now fixed on the same dark corner. The air grew heavy, thick with a stillness that felt unnatural. The distant city hum had receded, or perhaps their heightened senses were simply filtering it out. Only the drip, drip, drip of the icicle remained, a morbid metronome.
Bethany took a tentative step, then another, moving with a predator's quiet determination towards the corner. Kenneth hesitated for a fraction of a second, then followed, his heart thumping a frantic rhythm against his ribs. He felt a strange combination of fear and morbid curiosity, a pull he couldn't quite resist. Ozzie, clutching his scanning device, came last, his face a pale, strained mask in the encroaching gloom. The green-blue mark on the wall pulsed behind them, a silent sentinel.
As Bethany reached the bend, she paused, her hand pressed against the gritty brick. Her breath hitched. She looked back at Kenneth, her eyes wide, then pointed to a small, almost hidden alcove, partially obscured by a rusted metal panel that had peeled away from the wall. There, nestled in the shadows, was something old, something forgotten. An object. Dark and metallic, mostly covered in a thick crust of grime and corrosion. But as their eyes adjusted, they could make out a faint outline. A box. Maybe. Or a case. Whatever it was, it radiated the same faint, green-blue light as the mark on the wall, a ghostly twin in the growing darkness.
She reached out, her fingers trembling slightly, and brushed away a thick cobweb, revealing more of the object. It was indeed a box, about the size of a shoebox, fashioned from a dark, heavy metal that felt incredibly cold to the touch. A series of intricate, almost alien symbols were etched into its surface, identical in style to the mark on the wall, but far more numerous, forming a complex, unsettling pattern. The faint green-blue light seemed to be emanating from these symbols, pulsing with a slow, deliberate rhythm that matched the one Ozzie had detected. A low hum, just at the edge of hearing, vibrated from the box.
Bethany knelt, her eyes fixed on the archaic script. "This… this is more than just a legend, isn't it?" she whispered, her voice barely audible. Her hand, still hovering above the box, seemed drawn to it by an invisible thread. Kenneth felt a surge of unease, a deep, unsettling certainty that they had stumbled onto something far older and more dangerous than any urban myth. The silence of the alley pressed in, profound and absolute, and the cold deepened, seeping into their very core.
Ozzie finally reached them, his breath coming in short, sharp bursts. He held his device up to the box, its screen now flashing an angry red, the numbers spiralling out of control. "The energy levels… they're spiking. This isn't dormant. It's… active." His voice was strained, laced with a fear Kenneth hadn't heard from him before. He watched as Bethany's fingers, almost unconsciously, reached out further, drawn by the pulsing symbols, ready to touch the surface of the ancient, cold metal. The faint humming sound from the box intensified, a low thrum that vibrated through the very pavement beneath their feet, promising to unleash something profound and unknowable.
Unfinished Tales and Fun Short Stories to Read
The Chill Mark is an unfinished fragment from the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories collection, an experimental, creative research project by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners Storytelling clubs. Each chapter is a unique interdisciplinary arts and narrative storytelling experiment, born from a collaboration between artists and generative AI, designed to explore the boundaries of creative writing, automation, and storytelling. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario.
By design, these stories have no beginning and no end. Many stories are fictional, but many others are not. They are snapshots from worlds that never fully exist, inviting you to imagine what comes before and what happens next. We had fun exploring this project, and hope you will too.