The Frozen Vigil

by Eva Suluk

The silence of the rooftop, fractured only by the distant hum of the city and the whisper of falling snow, was a deceptive thing. Isabeau pressed closer to the iced parapet, the frigid concrete a familiar ache against her cheek. Her breath, a visible plume, condensed instantly, clinging to the woollen balaclava that protected most of her face. Below, the narrow cobblestone street of Prague lay shrouded in a fresh, unbroken layer of white, each gas lamp a hazy halo in the encroaching twilight. She had been still for hours, a statue carved from shadow and patience, the 85mm lens of her field glasses an extension of her own gaze, fixed on the third-floor window opposite.

Her fingers, despite the thick, insulated gloves, were growing stiff, a dull throb resonating from the tips. She flexed them, a small, unconscious movement. The air, heavy with the scent of wet stone and the faint, acrid tang of distant coal smoke, bit at any exposed skin. It wasn't just cold; it was the kind of pervasive, ancient cold that seeped into marrow, promising frostbite and leaving behind a residue of fatigue.

"Status report, Isabeau," Sterling's voice, calm and unhurried, crackled through her comms earpiece. It was a familiar anchor in the vast, swirling expanse of a winter operation.

Isabeau swallowed, her throat dry. "Still a ghost. No movement inside for the last three hours. Snowfall intensifying. Visibility… marginal at best. But the thermal signature is consistent. He's in there."

"Good. Hold position. We don't want to spook the fox before it leaves the den."

A tendril of doubt, cold as the night itself, coiled in Isabeau’s gut. This was always the hardest part: the waiting, the anticipation of an inevitable rupture in the fragile peace. Each mission felt like this, a delicate balance poised on a blade's edge, and every moment stretched taut, threatening to snap. She remembered a similar vigil in Sarajevo, the biting wind off the Dinaric Alps, the same oppressive quiet preceding the gunfire. Her mind, in its associative way, drifted to the image of ice cracking on a forgotten puddle, the intricate patterns just before the fracture.

She shifted her weight, the carefully chosen fabric of her tactical jacket rustling softly against the coarse material of her trousers. Every fibre of her being was keyed to the minutest detail, the almost imperceptible flicker of light in a window, the sound of a distant car door slamming, the precise angle of a snowflake catching the faint glow of the streetlamps below. This meticulous attention, this almost devotional focus, was what kept her alive, what kept the hope of an eventual return to something resembling a normal life flickering within her. A small, persistent hope, often buried under layers of professional detachment.

"You're quiet," Sterling observed, his tone a mild inquiry. "Everything in order?"

"Just… thinking," Isabeau replied, her voice a low murmur, barely audible even to herself. The lie tasted like cold metal. She was always thinking, but rarely did she articulate the chaotic, often contradictory stream of consciousness that flowed beneath her calm exterior. The weight of the mission, the implications of what Doctor Orenge represented, pressed down on her. Orenge was not a simple target; she was a nexus, a key. Her capture, or removal, could unravel a network that had sown chaos across three continents. The stakes were impossibly high.


A Sudden Rupture

A flicker. Not a light, but a subtle distortion in the window across the street. A movement. Isabeau froze, her heart giving a clumsy thump against her ribs. She brought the field glasses back up, her hands steady despite the sudden surge of adrenaline.

"Movement," she reported, the word a tight whisper. "Third floor, middle window. A shadow… appears to be drawing the curtains."

"Confirmed. Maintain visual. Do not engage unless given explicit authorisation."

The curtains, thick velvet, were slowly drawn, obscuring her view. Isabeau lowered the glasses, a shiver, unrelated to the cold, tracing its way down her spine. The sudden closure felt less like a preparation for sleep and more like a door clicking shut. A trap being set. Or perhaps, a signal.

Her gaze swept the street below, searching for anomalies. A lone figure, hunched against the snow, hurried past. A black Skoda, dusted with white, was parked haphazardly a block down, its engine emitting a faint, rhythmic purr. Nothing overtly suspicious, but the world had a way of cloaking its true intentions in mundane detail. She remembered once mistaking a child’s discarded toy for a bomb, the sheer terror of that misidentification, the frantic, unnecessary evacuation. The memory was a dull, uncomfortable ache.

Then, a sudden, sharp glint. It came from the rooftop directly opposite Orenge's building, slightly to her left. A rifle scope, reflecting the last gasp of twilight.

"Sterling! Counter-sniper position, rooftop opposite Orenge's building, directly facing subject window," Isabeau hissed, her voice tight with urgency. "Optical confirmed. He's lining up a shot."

A pause on the comms, a fraction too long. "Understood. Stand by, Isabeau. We're dispatching a team."

"Dispatching? He's going to fire!" Her professional detachment frayed, giving way to a raw edge of frustration. This was it. The delicate balance was rupturing. "I need to intercept."

"Negative, Isabeau. Too much risk. We don't know who this is. Stand down." Sterling's voice was firm, unyielding.

But Isabeau's mind was already racing, the decision made. Orenge was paramount. If this unknown assassin took her out, the entire mission would crumble, years of intelligence work wasted. The hope she carried, the quiet yearning for a future where her sacrifices meant something, would be extinguished.

She pushed off the parapet, her boots finding purchase on the slick, frozen gravel. The distant hum of the Skoda's engine now sounded louder, more insistent. A getaway vehicle? Or another element of the trap? She didn't have time to analyse.

"I'm going to them," she stated, not asking for permission. "I have a clear line of sight to the opposing rooftop via the alley. It's the only way."

"Isabeau, that's an unacceptable risk. You are to hold position!" Sterling's voice rose, the calm façade cracking.

She ignored him, already moving. Her route was calculated, a complex dance over snow-covered rooftops, across narrow gaps between buildings, using fire escapes as precarious bridges. The air was a frozen whip, lashing at her face, stinging her eyes. She tasted the metallic tang of exertion, her muscles burning, but a strange clarity had settled over her, sharpening her senses. Each leap, each grasp of a cold metal railing, was executed with a brutal efficiency. The cold, which had been an enemy, now seemed to lend itself to her purpose, freezing the world into a sharp, clear tableau of danger and motion.

She reached the edge of her current building, looking across a wider chasm to the assassin's rooftop. It was perhaps twelve metres, a daunting gap, made treacherous by the wind and the accumulated snow. Below, a dumpster lay, overflowing with dark, frozen refuse.

She heard the faint, dull thud of a silenced shot, a sound easily swallowed by the city's muted groan. Her heart seized. Too late? Had she failed? A frantic check with her field glasses confirmed it: the window across from Orenge's building, the one she had been watching, now bore a small, spiderweb crack in its centre. A dark stain began to spread slowly from the point of impact.

"Orenge's hit!" Isabeau yelled into the comms, her voice raw. "Shot fired! The target is compromised!"

"Isabeau! What is your status?" Sterling demanded, the professional calm utterly shattered.

"I'm engaging the sniper! Going for the roof now!"

She took a running jump, the wind a sudden, powerful hand pushing against her, threatening to send her tumbling into the alley below. For a heart-stopping moment, she was suspended, a dark silhouette against the grey, snowy sky, the ground rushing up at her. Her gloved hands slapped against the edge of the opposing rooftop, the force of the impact jarring her teeth. A groan escaped her as her shoulder screamed in protest, but she held on, scrabbling for purchase, her boots kicking frantically at the rough brickwork.

With a final, desperate surge of strength, she hauled herself over the lip, landing heavily on her stomach, the icy grit grinding against her cheek. She was up in an instant, her sidearm drawn, sweeping the rooftop.

The sniper was a lean figure, crouched low behind a chimney stack, the long barrel of his rifle extending like a predatory limb. He was already breaking down his weapon, moving with a practised, chilling efficiency. He was not alone. Another figure, bulkier, stood guard near the rooftop door, a compact submachine gun held loosely.

"Drop your weapons!" Isabeau commanded, her voice cutting through the wind, though it felt thin and reedy to her own ears.

The sniper paused, then slowly turned. His face was obscured by a dark hood and a tactical mask, but his eyes, when they met hers, held a disconcerting stillness, utterly devoid of surprise or fear. The guard, meanwhile, brought his weapon up, a gesture of almost casual menace.

"Isabeau! What are you doing? Fall back! That's not part of the plan!" Sterling's voice, now laced with outright panic, burst through her comms, a cacophony against the sudden, stark silence of the rooftop confrontation.

"The plan's gone to hell, Sterling," she muttered, though she knew he couldn't hear her.

The sniper, in a fluid, unnervingly deliberate motion, finished disassembling his rifle, placing the components into a soft-sided case. He then straightened, his gaze still fixed on her. He made no move to draw another weapon. It was the guard who was the immediate threat.

Isabeau fired, a single, sharp report that echoed briefly off the surrounding buildings. The bullet struck the guard in the shoulder, a dull thud followed by a choked cry. He stumbled back, his submachine gun clattering to the icy rooftop. He was hurt, but not incapacitated.

The sniper, astonishingly, remained still, observing her with that unnerving calm. It was as if he were waiting, or perhaps, assessing. This wasn't a standard hit. This felt… different. More theatrical, perhaps.

The wounded guard, clutching his shoulder, fumbled for a secondary weapon. Isabeau adjusted her aim, but before she could fire again, a loud, deep thrum vibrated through the air. A helicopter. Low and fast, it emerged from the swirling snow, its powerful searchlight cutting a blinding swathe across the rooftop. It was black, unmarked, and its appearance was utterly unexpected.

"Contact! Unidentified aerial asset, fast mover, bearing two-seven-zero!" Isabeau shouted into her comms, though her words were swallowed by the rising roar of the rotor blades. The hope she had nurtured, the one that kept her going through countless lonely nights and dangerous days, suddenly felt very fragile, very distant.

The sniper, still observing her, gave a slow, almost imperceptible nod. Then, with a sudden, impossible speed, he lunged towards the edge of the rooftop, not towards her, but towards the side opposite Orenge's building, the side that overlooked a sheer drop into the darkened alley. The helicopter dipped, its rotor wash whipping up a furious blizzard of snow and debris, momentarily obscuring everything.

Isabeau fired, two quick shots, aimed at the sniper’s retreating figure. She couldn’t tell if they connected through the blinding snow and the disorienting rush of air. The guard, recovering, returned fire erratically with his sidearm, the small calibre rounds pinging off the chimney stack near her head. She ducked, the concrete showering her with icy dust.

When the rotor wash cleared for a second, the sniper was gone. He had simply vanished. Was he picked up by the helicopter? Or had he jumped? The drop was considerable. Her mind, in a sudden, jarring leap, conjured the image of a broken doll, splayed on the cobblestones. The thought made her stomach lurch.

The helicopter hovered, a dark, menacing leviathan against the swirling white. A figure, obscured by the storm, appeared at its open side door, aiming a heavy weapon at her. The sound of its firing was deafening, the rooftop beneath her feet vibrating violently. Large calibre rounds tore into the chimney stack, sending chunks of brick and mortar flying.


The Precipice

She dived for cover behind a low ventilation unit, the cold metal biting into her cheek. The air was thick with gunpowder, dust, and the dizzying, disorienting force of the helicopter's downdraft. Her ears were ringing. Sterling's voice was a distant, garbled shout in her earpiece, lost amidst the chaos.

This was it. The precipice. The end of the line. The mission, her future, everything she had quietly hoped for, teetered on this one impossible moment. The cold reality of the situation washed over her, chilling her far more effectively than the winter air. She was alone, exposed, with two potential adversaries — the remaining guard, now scrambling back towards the rooftop access door, and the unyielding force of the unidentified helicopter.

She peered over the edge of the ventilation unit, her eyes scanning the snow-swept rooftop, her mind calculating angles, escape routes, the slim possibility of survival. The guard was almost at the door, clutching his wounded arm. The helicopter was positioning itself, preparing for another pass, its searchlight unwavering, pinning her like a trapped moth.

Isabeau took a deep breath, the freezing air burning her lungs. The choice was stark, brutal: stay and be eliminated, or take a desperate, almost certainly fatal, leap. Her hand went to the small, discreet data chip in her pocket, the one she had retrieved from the drop point earlier, the true objective of the mission, not Orenge herself. It was encrypted, useless without the proper protocols, but it represented everything. A final, desperate attempt at defiance.

She glanced at the building opposite, the shattered window of Orenge’s apartment. A dark smear, growing larger, confirmed the hit. The mission had indeed gone to hell. And now, she was left to pick up the pieces, or be crushed by them.

The helicopter dipped lower, its heavy weapon training on her cover. The sound of its rotors vibrated through her bones, a primal, inescapable roar. There was no escape from this roof. She squeezed her eyes shut for a moment, not in fear, but in a strange, fleeting memory of a summer's day, sun on her face, the distant sound of children laughing. A life that seemed impossibly distant now.

Then, she opened them, her gaze sharp, resolute. There was an old, rusted lightning rod extending precariously from the side of the building, reaching down towards the alley. It was a long shot, a desperate gamble. The metal would be slick with ice, the fall unforgiving if she missed. But staying here was certain death.

She heard the whirring of the heavy weapon, gearing up for another burst. The guard was gone, presumably through the rooftop door. It was just her and the machine in the sky.

With a sudden burst of adrenaline, Isabeau launched herself from behind the ventilation unit, sprinting towards the lightning rod, her fingers outstretched, numb and clumsy, but driven by a fierce, desperate will to live. The helicopter's weapon thundered, tearing into the spot where she had been moments before, the impact shaking the entire rooftop.

She reached the lightning rod, her gloved hand closing around the freezing metal with a painful, bone-jarring grip. Her weight pulled her downwards, the rusted bolts groaning in protest. She swung her legs, trying to find purchase, to wrap herself around the cold, unforgiving steel. The world spun. Snow lashed at her face, her hair. The helicopter roared above, its searchlight still fixed on her, relentless.

She was sliding, her gloves offering little friction against the smooth, icy surface of the rod. Below, the alley seemed to yawn, a black maw promising oblivion. Her fingers were screaming, losing their purchase. One hand slipped. She dangled precariously, held by a single, desperate grip, her body thrashing wildly against the wind, her boots scraping uselessly against the brickwork.

The roar of the helicopter seemed to intensify, a final, deafening pronouncement. Her grip, already failing, began to give way, bit by agonizing bit. The metal was too cold, too slick. The hope, that quiet ember, finally threatened to extinguish entirely. The dark maw below beckoned. The silence, when it came, would be absolute.

Unfinished Tales and Fun Short Stories to Read

The Frozen Vigil is an unfinished fragment from the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories collection, an experimental, creative research project by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners Storytelling clubs. Each chapter is a unique interdisciplinary arts and narrative storytelling experiment, born from a collaboration between artists and generative AI, designed to explore the boundaries of creative writing, automation, and storytelling. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario.

By design, these stories have no beginning and no end. Many stories are fictional, but many others are not. They are snapshots from worlds that never fully exist, inviting you to imagine what comes before and what happens next. We had fun exploring this project, and hope you will too.