An Analysis of Subterranean Hum

by Jamie F. Bell

Excellent. As a literary critic and psychologist, I find this chapter, "Subterranean Hum," to be a masterfully constructed piece of introductory horror, relying on character archetypes and carefully deployed narrative techniques to transform a mundane setting into a locus of cosmic dread.

Here is a detailed analysis.


Psychological Character Profiles

The chapter introduces a classic psychological trio, each representing a fundamental human response to the unknown. Their interplay is the engine that drives the narrative forward.

# **Paul: The Pragmatist / The Skeptic Anchor**

* **Psychological Profile:** Paul is the embodiment of grounded reality and the ego's defense mechanisms. His cynicism ("Our rich history of mildew and broken boiler pipes?") is not mere negativity; it is a shield against disappointment and the chaos of the unknown. He lives in a world of tangible problems: rust, plaster, and "half-baked municipal plans." This pragmatism makes him the audience's surrogate. We experience the story's mounting weirdness through his reluctant, disbelieving eyes. His initial reaction to the object is a desperate attempt to categorize it within his known world ("mining slag," "ugly paperweight"). This is a classic psychological response of **rationalization**—an attempt to reduce anxiety by explaining an unsettling event in a way that seems logical and non-threatening.

* **Motivation:** His primary motivation is the maintenance of normalcy. He wants to complete the mundane task and go home. The object's appearance is a direct assault on his worldview, and his final realization that his "quiet summer was over" signifies the traumatic collapse of that worldview. The "primal, ancient dread" that unfurls in him is the terror of realizing his rational framework is insufficient to explain reality.

# **Emilie: The Idealist / The Ambitious Catalyst**

* **Psychological Profile:** Emilie represents boundless optimism and ambition, a personality driven by the **pleasure principle** and the pursuit of novelty. Her "brightly coloured overalls" are a visual metaphor for her outlook—a splash of vibrant energy against a grey, decaying world. Initially, her enthusiasm is naive, focused on community and art. However, the discovery of the object reveals a deeper, more predatory aspect of her personality. Her shock quickly morphs into a "dangerous glint," and she immediately sees the object not as a threat, but as an opportunity—a "star exhibit."

* **Motivation:** Her motivation shifts from altruistic community-building to self-serving ambition and the thrill of discovery. She is the catalyst who will push the investigation forward, not out of fear or scholarly duty, but out of a desire to possess, name ("The Unseen Core"), and display the mystery. This makes her potentially the most dangerous character, as her ambition may blind her to the true nature of the forces they are uncovering.

# **Gavin: The Archivist / The Gnostic Oracle**

* **Psychological Profile:** Gavin is the quiet keeper of secrets, a man who has already detached himself from the mundane world that Paul clings to. He "prefer[s] the company of faded documents to living humans," suggesting a personality more comfortable with the abstract, the historical, and the hidden. He is the bridge between the known and the unknown. Unlike Paul, he shows no surprise at the false wall, and unlike Emilie, he shows no exploitative excitement. His reaction is one of quiet, scholarly certainty.

* **Motivation:** Gavin is motivated by knowledge and understanding, but on a different plane than the others. He immediately contextualizes the object within a pre-existing, esoteric framework ("The legends of the Old Cold. The whispers of the Deep Dark"). He is the oracle figure, the one who already possesses the forbidden lexicon needed to interpret the event. His calm "It hums" is far more terrifying than an exclamation of shock, as it implies a familiarity with such phenomena. He represents the acceptance of a larger, more terrifying reality.


Exploration of Underlying Themes

The narrative is built upon several potent and overlapping themes common in cosmic and psychological horror.

* **The Intrusion of the Uncanny into the Mundane:** This is the central theme. The story starts with the most banal of projects: a "community art gallery" in a basement. This setting is deliberately chosen for its tediousness and decay. The discovery of the object is a violent intrusion of the utterly alien into this space. The object doesn't belong to the world of "Mrs. Henderson's watercolours," and this juxtaposition creates the primary source of horror.

* **The Limits of Human Knowledge:** The object is defined by what it is *not*. It is "not metal, not stone, not wood." Its angles are "impossible," and it "defies known physics." This directly challenges the empirical, scientific worldview. Paul's struggle is a microcosm of humanity's struggle when faced with phenomena that cannot be measured, categorized, or explained away. The story suggests that our "sensible world" is merely a thin veneer over something vast and incomprehensible.

* **The Seduction of the Unknown:** While Paul is repulsed by the mystery, both Emilie and Gavin are drawn to it, albeit for different reasons. Emilie sees it as a path to notoriety, while Gavin sees it as a confirmation of hidden truths. This theme explores the dangerous allure of the forbidden, the human drive to pull at the thread that might unravel everything. The final line, "They had to know," seals their fate, suggesting that the human need for answers will lead them into peril.

* **The Subterranean as the Subconscious:** The basement setting is a powerful metaphor. It is a space beneath the surface of the everyday world (the rec hall), a place of forgotten things, dampness, and decay. In psychoanalytic terms, it represents the subconscious mind. The act of breaking through a "false wall" to find a hidden object is a perfect allegory for breaking through mental barriers to uncover a repressed, primal, or terrifying truth about the nature of reality.


Analysis of Narrative Techniques

The author employs several effective techniques to build suspense and psychological depth.

* **Third-Person Limited Point of View:** The story is told almost exclusively through Paul's perspective. This is a crucial choice. By grounding the narrative in the mind of the most skeptical character, the author makes the supernatural events feel more credible and impactful. We don't just see the impossible object; we feel Paul's sanity straining against it. His internal monologue provides a running commentary of disbelief and rising terror that mirrors what the reader is likely experiencing.

* **Atmospheric Setting and Personification:** The basement is not just a location; it is a character. It "smelled like failure," and the dampness "bloomed like some malignant fungus." The ceiling "sagged like a wet mattress." This language imbues the setting with a sense of oppressive, sentient decay, creating a mood of dread long before the object is discovered. The basement's transformation from a symbol of "bureaucratic tedium" to an "antechamber to something vast" marks the story's tonal shift.

* **Sensory Contrast:** The author masterfully uses sensory details to highlight the object's alien nature. The oppressive, "thick" summer heat is contrasted with the object's "bone-deep, radiating cold" that "suck[s] the warmth from the very air." The mundane sounds of scraping and metal shrieking are contrasted with the object's hum, which is described not as a sound but as a "pressure in Paul's skull." This synesthetic description makes the object's presence a physical violation.

* **Pacing and Revelation:** The chapter's pacing is deliberate and highly effective. It begins slowly, mired in Paul's cynical observations. The pace quickens with Gavin's meticulous discovery of the false wall, building suspense. The reveal of the object is the climax, followed by a moment of stunned silence. The chapter then concludes with a slowing of pace, allowing Paul (and the reader) to process the horrifying implications of the discovery, ending on a note of chilling certainty that sets the stage for the rest of the story. The mundane has been irrevocably broken, and "the terrifying work, was just beginning."

About This Analysis

This analysis is part of the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories project, a creative research initiative by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners collectives. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario. Each analysis explores the narrative techniques, thematic elements, and creative potential within its corresponding chapter fragment.

By examining these unfinished stories, we aim to understand how meaning is constructed and how generative tools can intersect with artistic practice. This is where the story becomes a subject of study, inviting a deeper look into the craft of storytelling itself.