A Gust of Ochre and Concrete

by Eva Suluk

Sam's breath plumed white in the crisp air, a plume that seemed to mock the vibrant magenta 'W' he'd just finished on the water tower's curved flank. He wiped his nose with the back of a gloved hand, the metallic tang of spray paint still sharp on his tongue. "Done," he grunted, stepping back. The 'W' was bold, sprawling, a defiant splash against the fading autumn light. Below, the city sprawled out, a grid of amber and ruby streetlights beginning to prickle to life.

Beth, perched on the low brick parapet, her knees drawn to her chest, didn't look up from her phone. "You know, for someone who insists on artistry, you move like a startled pigeon, Sam." Her voice, usually a dry rasp, was muffled by the wind whipping strands of dark hair across her face. "Just sayin'. A stealth pigeon, maybe."

"Pigeons are graceful hunters of crumbs," Sam countered, already capping the aerosol can. He moved towards her, his old canvas shoes scuffing against the gravel. "And I think that's a new personal best for line quality. Look at that gradient."

Beth finally glanced at the 'W', then at the horizon. "It's… loud. And also, we're definitely being watched." She didn't sound panicked, just matter-of-fact. Her finger, however, was already tapping furiously on her screen.

Sam froze. "What? By who? Mrs. Henderson from accounting?"

"The drone," Beth said, a slight tremor in her voice now. Her head tilted up, indicating a tiny, whirring speck against the deepening grey. It shimmered, a metallic beetle reflecting the last gasps of daylight. "It's not security, Sam. It's… bigger. And it's coming straight for us."

The whirring grew, a low mechanical hum that vibrated in the soles of their feet. Sam's stomach lurched. This wasn't the usual private security patrol. This drone was larger, sleeker, its twin red eyes glowing with an unsettling intensity. "Bigger? What does bigger mean?"

"It means we run, you idiot!" Beth scrambled up, her movements fluid and urgent. She was already halfway to the fire escape, a tangled iron skeleton bolted to the adjacent building. Sam didn't argue. He shoved the spray paint into his worn backpack, the cold metal pressing against his spine, and launched himself after her. His legs felt like lead, then surprisingly light as adrenaline surged.

The Scramble Across Rooftops

They dropped onto the first landing with a clatter, sending a shower of loose rust and grit spiralling down. The drone’s hum was a furious wasp now, directly above the roof they'd just abandoned. Sam risked a glance up. It hovered, unblinking, its red eyes fixed on them. This was less a casual observation and more… pursuit.

"Left!" Beth yelled, already halfway down the second flight of stairs. "The alley. Maybe we can lose it in the narrow bit!" Her voice was rough, breathy. Sam's own lungs burned, the cold air rasping in his throat. He could feel the familiar ache in his calves already, a dull throb that would morph into screaming agony later. He focused on Beth's swinging braid, a dark whip against her worn denim jacket.

They hit the ground running, boots slapping on damp pavement. The alley was a labyrinth of overflowing bins, graffiti-scarred brick, and the faint, sweet-and-sour stench of rotting fruit. It was exactly what they needed. The drone, too large for the narrow confines, would be forced to ascend.

"This way!" Beth skidded around a corner, nearly colliding with a teetering stack of discarded pallets. Sam followed, his chest heaving, his vision blurring slightly at the edges. He snagged his hoodie on a jagged piece of corrugated metal, tearing the fabric with a soft rip. He didn't stop.

The alley opened onto a wider street, bustling with late afternoon traffic. The drone, a tiny star against the darkening sky, ascended slowly, patiently. "It's still watching," Sam gasped, leaning against a lamp post, his knees threatening to buckle. A woman in a dark coat, carrying a briefcase, sidestepped them, giving them a wide, disapproving berth.

Beth pulled him, not gently. "No time. The old Printworks. We can cut through." The Printworks was a sprawling, derelict building, notorious for its crumbling interior and a patchwork of broken windows. It was a local legend, a playground for urban explorers, and apparently, a temporary escape route for teenage delinquents. It also wasn't on any normal patrol route.

They burst through a gap in the plywood hoarding, the sound of splintering wood echoing in the sudden quiet. Inside, the air was thick with the scent of damp dust, old paper, and something metallic, like stale blood or old machinery oil. Light, filtered through grimy windows, painted stripes across the concrete floor, illuminating drifts of fallen plaster and shattered glass. A pigeon fluttered past their heads, startling them both.

"Watch out for the…" Beth started, but it was too late. Sam's foot slipped on a patch of wet moss growing on the concrete. He windmilled his arms, a frantic, comical dance, before slamming his knee into a rusted I-beam. A sharp, searing pain shot up his leg, stealing his breath.

He slumped against the beam, gasping, sweat stinging his eyes. "Bloody hell," he muttered, rubbing his knee. The drone's hum was a distant memory, replaced by the thumping of his own heart and the creak of the old building settling around them. He could taste the metallic tang of panic and exertion.

"You okay?" Beth whispered, her voice tight with suppressed anxiety. She was already peering around a stack of old printing presses, their huge, inert forms looming like sleeping giants in the gloom. Her fingers fidgeted with the hem of her jacket, a nervous habit.

"Yeah, I'm just… great. Fantastic." He tried to push off the beam, but his knee screamed in protest. It felt like it was going to give out. "Perfectly fine. Just taking a breather, you know, admiring the… ambience."


A Stillness Before the Storm

Beth ignored his sarcasm, her attention fixed elsewhere. Her head snapped back, a sharp, almost imperceptible movement. "Sam. Did you… hear that?" Her voice was barely a breath, all the earlier banter gone. The journalistic detail of her voice, stripped of its usual wit, made Sam's blood run cold.

He listened. The silence of the Printworks was immense, broken only by the drip of water somewhere deep inside and the distant moan of a train. But then, there it was: a low, guttural murmur, followed by a sharper, almost clinical click. It wasn't the sound of an animal, or a squatter settling in. It was human. And it was too close.

They exchanged a look, a shared moment of grim understanding. The drone was one thing. A couple of security guards, annoying, but manageable. This? This felt different. "Stay low," Beth mouthed, pulling him down behind the rust-eaten shell of a massive printing press. The metal was cold against his cheek, smelling faintly of stale oil and damp earth.

Through a gap in the machinery, Sam saw them. Two figures, silhouetted against a broken window at the far end of the cavernous room. One was huge, a barrel-chested man whose shadow stretched grotesquely long in the fading light. He was dressed in a dark, nondescript coat, his posture suggesting a coiled tension. The other was smaller, slighter, meticulously dressed, even here in this ruin. He held a small, dark object in his hand, rotating it slowly.

The larger man, the Lookout, spoke, his voice a low rumble that vibrated through the floor. "We got a problem with the drop site, then? You said it was clean." His words were clipped, without a hint of Winnipeg's usual softened vowels.

The smaller man, the Silent Man, simply tilted his head, the gesture dismissive. He continued to turn the object in his hand. It gleamed faintly, reflecting the weak light. Sam couldn't make out what it was, but it looked important, dangerous.

Beth nudged Sam, her elbow digging into his side. She pointed with her chin towards a small wooden crate tucked away beneath a workbench. "Behind that. Deeper in." They started to crawl, their movements slow and deliberate, each scuff of their shoes magnified in the oppressive quiet. Sam's knee throbbed, a dull, insistent beat against his skull, but he pushed past it.

They reached the crate, a flimsy shield against whatever was unfolding before them. Peering through a crack in the rotten wood, Sam could see the Silent Man finally speaking, his voice a low, raspy whisper. "Complications. Minor. The item is here. Payment?"

The Lookout grunted, his hand disappearing inside his coat. "It's all here. Don't worry about the noise upstairs." He jerked his head vaguely upwards, a chilling implication that whoever was on the roof, perhaps even the drone, was under his purview. Sam's blood ran cold. This wasn't just some random encounter. They'd stumbled into something far more intricate, far more perilous.

Beth gasped, a small, involuntary sound that was immediately swallowed by the vastness of the room. A stray piece of loose plaster had shifted beneath her hand, sending a tiny cascade of grit onto the concrete floor. It was barely audible, a soft *shhh*, but in that suffocating silence, it was a gunshot.

Both figures at the far end of the room froze. The Lookout’s head snapped up, his eyes, even from this distance, felt like they were piercing through the grime and rust directly into their hiding spot. The Silent Man slowly, deliberately, pocketed the gleaming object. The low murmur of the train outside seemed to intensify, mocking their predicament. They were caught. Not by a drone, not by a security guard, but by something far more sinister. Sam felt a cold dread settle in his stomach, heavier than the cold steel of the spray paint can in his backpack.

The Unblinking Gaze

The Lookout took a step, then another, his heavy boots echoing in the stillness. He wasn't running, wasn't rushing. His movements were slow, predatory, each step deliberate. It was the most terrifying thing Sam had ever witnessed. The man was confident, unhurried, as if he already knew exactly where they were, knew there was no escape. The broken glass on the floor, usually a playful hazard, now felt like a minefield. Any slight movement, any misplaced foot, would give them away completely.

Beth pressed herself against the rotten wood of the crate, her breath coming in shallow, ragged gasps against his ear. He could feel her trembling. The familiar witty banter that usually flowed between them, even in tight situations, was utterly gone, replaced by a suffocating fear. This wasn't a game. This wasn't mischief. This was a deep, chilling dread that twisted in his gut.

He squeezed his eyes shut for a second, then forced them open. He scanned the cavernous space. No other exits, not that he could see from here. Just towering machinery, crumbling walls, and the slow, inexorable approach of the Lookout. The drone, the 'W' on the water tower, all seemed ridiculously trivial now. A silly prank that had, through a series of increasingly bad decisions, led them to this moment, trapped and vulnerable. He thought of his mum, probably making stew right now, wondering why he hadn't texted back. The thought felt distant, unreal.

The Lookout was closer now, his silhouette growing larger, more defined. Sam could make out the bulk of his shoulders, the thick neck. He seemed to sniff the air, like a hound on a scent. The metallic tang of rust and oil, once a simple descriptor of the building, now felt like a warning, a premonition. A single, dull bead of sweat traced a cold path down Sam's temple, pooling at his jawline. The silence was so profound it hummed, a high-pitched whine that threatened to burst his eardrums. He looked at Beth, her face pale, eyes wide with a fear he mirrored. This was it. The consequences.

Beth’s hand reached out, fumbling, found his own, and squeezed. Her grip was cold, desperate. He squeezed back, a silent, shared acknowledgment of the terrifying unknown that was about to engulf them. The Lookout stopped, just a few metres away, his head cocked slightly, listening. He seemed to be looking directly at their flimsy hiding spot, but his gaze was unblinking, unreadable. The only sound now was the ragged echo of their own breathing, and the frantic pounding of their hearts against their ribs. The melancholic light of autumn bled through the broken windows, casting long, stark shadows that seemed to mock their dwindling hope.

The cold, the damp, the lingering scent of autumn decay and old machinery, pressed in on them. They had pushed their luck too far, leapt one rooftop too many. The thrill of the chase had curdled into pure, unadulterated terror. He could feel the fine layer of dust on his skin, the almost imperceptible tremor in his knees. He wanted to shout, to run, to disappear, but his body was locked, a statue carved from fear. The silence stretched, a taut wire, threatening to snap. And then, a small, almost imperceptible sound: a faint click, like a safety being released.

He knew, with a sudden, sickening clarity, that the drone had not been the biggest of their worries. The magenta 'W' on the water tower, meant as a statement, now felt like a marker, a beacon to their foolishness. The autumn leaves outside, vibrant in their death, felt like a cruel joke against the grim reality of their situation. The cold concrete floor pressed into his skin, an unforgiving mattress for what felt like his final moments of unburdened youth.

The Lookout moved again, his hand moving slowly, deliberately, towards his coat pocket. Sam held his breath, the air burning in his chest. Every instinct screamed at him to run, but his feet were rooted to the spot, concrete on concrete. He just watched, helpless, as the man’s fingers brushed against something metallic inside his jacket, the faint glint visible even in the dim light. And then, just as suddenly, the man paused, his head cocked again, listening, not to them, but to something else. A faint, new sound. A distant siren, barely audible above the thumping of Sam’s own heart, yet clear enough to make the Lookout hesitate. His eyes, though still unreadable, flickered, a momentary break in their unblinking intensity.

Sam saw a tiny window, a fleeting moment of opportunity, though he didn't know what to do with it. His mind raced, a blur of panicked images, none of them helpful. He felt the cold fear, but beneath it, a tiny, desperate spark of defiance. He wasn't just a pigeon. He was something more. But what?

The siren grew louder, a wailing, insistent sound that cut through the oppressive quiet of the Printworks. The Lookout cursed, a low, guttural sound, and pulled his hand away from his coat, his attention split. He glanced quickly between their hiding spot and the shattered window, his face a mask of frustration. The moment stretched, agonizingly long, caught between the siren's approaching wail and the chilling reality of their discovery. Sam's mind was a frantic scramble of what-ifs, his body tense, ready to spring, but with nowhere to go. The silence, now broken by the siren, somehow felt even more terrifying, highlighting their vulnerability.

Unfinished Tales and Fun Short Stories to Read

A Gust of Ochre and Concrete is an unfinished fragment from the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories collection, an experimental, creative research project by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners Storytelling clubs. Each chapter is a unique interdisciplinary arts and narrative storytelling experiment, born from a collaboration between artists and generative AI, designed to explore the boundaries of creative writing, automation, and storytelling. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario.

By design, these stories have no beginning and no end. Many stories are fictional, but many others are not. They are snapshots from worlds that never fully exist, inviting you to imagine what comes before and what happens next. We had fun exploring this project, and hope you will too.