A Chill in the Circuit
The silence shattered. Not with a shout, but with the sudden, distant grind of an engine. It was too close, too deliberate for a delivery van at this hour. Thom shoved Jamey forward, the action less gentle guidance and more raw instinct. "Move. Now."
Jamey stumbled, a curse caught in her throat, her boots skidding on a patch of black ice before she found purchase. The building behind them, a hulking monolith of frosted glass and steel, seemed to exhale a cold dread. They’d breached its automated security less than ten minutes ago, a clean, silent ghosting through a service entrance, but a silent alarm was still an alarm. And 'they' were fast. Too fast.
The data chip, a sliver of cold plastic, felt like a burning coal in Thom's pocket. It was heavy, far heavier than its negligible weight suggested. Evidence. Proof. Or maybe just a death sentence, depending on how the next few minutes unravelled. His breath burned in his lungs, each gasp a frozen splinter. The air itself seemed to resist their flight, thick with the smell of exhaust fumes and the sharp, metallic tang of extreme cold.
They scrambled down a service alley, the rough concrete walls slick with frozen condensation. Water pipes, thick as a man's arm, snaked overhead, dripping tiny icicles that shattered like glass beads when they brushed past. A discarded dumpster, overflowing with frozen refuse, offered a brief, inadequate shield. Jamey pressed herself against its rust-pocked side, her eyes wide, scanning the alley's mouth.
"Did you see..." she started, her voice a thin thread, but Thom cut her off with a sharp shake of his head. He didn’t need to see. He could feel it. The shift in the air. The faint, almost imperceptible sound of another engine, closer this time, and then the rhythmic thud of running boots on snow. Not one. At least two. He felt a cold knot tighten in his stomach. They weren’t amateurs. Not by a long shot.
He peered around the edge of the dumpster, his heart hammering against his ribs. The alley opened onto a main thoroughfare, usually bustling, but now a deserted expanse of white and grey. In the distance, a pair of headlights cut through the swirling snow, moving with an ominous slowness. Too slow for a patrol car, too deliberate for a civilian. It was a hunt.
"Back way," he murmured, already moving, tugging Jamey by the arm. She followed, her movements economical, her mind already calculating angles, escape routes. They were good at this, or at least, they had been. This felt different. More… clinical.
The alley twisted, narrowing into a choke point between two older brick buildings. Graffiti, long obscured by layers of frost, hinted at forgotten declarations. They pushed through a heavy steel door, its hinges groaning in protest, revealing a dim, cavernous space. It was a loading bay, long disused, the concrete floor uneven and slick with melted snow carried in by the wind. The air here was still and damp, carrying the faint, earthy smell of mould and forgotten things.
"Where are we?" Jamey whispered, her voice barely audible above the drumming of her own heartbeat. She glanced back at the steel door, a sliver of light illuminating the disturbed snow outside. They hadn't locked it. Couldn't afford the time.
"Doesn't matter," Thom grunted, his eyes already searching for another exit. "North. Underground. Less exposure." His mind was a frantic map, tracing familiar routes, discarded shortcuts. The downtown core, a maze of interconnected tunnels and parkades, offered both sanctuary and trap. He just had to pick the right one.
The Labyrinth Below
They found another door, this one lighter, leading into a warren of cramped corridors. The sudden blast of heat was almost shocking, making the air feel thick after the sub-zero temperatures outside. This wasn't an abandoned space; it was part of the city’s unseen circulatory system, service tunnels connecting various buildings, neglected but still functional. Fluorescent lights, flickering erratically, cast a sickly yellow glow, making their shadows jump and stretch like distorted phantoms.
"Hold on," Jamey said, her voice strained. She reached into her coat, pulling out a small, worn tablet. Her fingers, despite the cold, moved with practised speed over the touchscreen. "Trying to get a schematic. These tunnels… they branch." Her brow furrowed, a tiny muscle twitching at her temple.
Thom kept his back to the rough concrete wall, listening. The distant thud of their pursuers' boots was still there, a dull, relentless rhythm, closer now. They were in the building. He could feel the vibrations through the floor. A bead of sweat, cold and sharp, trickled down his temple, despite the chilling air. His palms, clammy inside his gloves, rubbed against each other. This was beyond journalistic curiosity. This was survival.
"Anything?" he asked, his voice low, a rasp. He tried to project calm, but the tremor in his hands betrayed him. He could taste the adrenaline, metallic and bitter, at the back of his throat.
Jamey swore softly. "Old system. Half the schematics are missing or corrupted. Looks like a dead end here, but… there’s a maintenance access. Leads to the parkade under the old Hudson’s Bay building. It's a maze down there."
A maze. A perfect place to get lost. Or to lose someone. Thom nodded, a grim acceptance. "Better than being cornered." He pushed open a heavy, unmarked fire door, revealing a concrete stairwell spiralling downwards into near darkness. The air grew colder again, heavy with the smell of stale exhaust and damp concrete.
They descended, their footsteps echoing eerily in the enclosed space. Each step felt heavier, each breath more laboured. The darkness was absolute save for the tiny beam of Jamey’s phone torch, a meagre comfort against the oppressive gloom. Thom kept his hand on her arm, a silent anchor. He could hear her ragged breathing, felt the tension coiling in her shoulders. His own fear was a dull thrum beneath his skin, a constant reminder of the stakes.
They reached the bottom, a subterranean cavern of concrete pillars and faded painted lines – the parkade. It was almost empty, a few isolated vehicles huddled like forgotten beasts. The artificial light from above was weak, barely penetrating the deeper recesses, leaving vast stretches of shadow where anything could hide.
"Stay low," Thom instructed, his voice a whisper that seemed to be swallowed by the cavernous space. They wove between parked cars, their shadows long and grotesque, distorted by the low-angle lighting. The silence here was different from the outside; it hummed with the dormant energy of machinery, the ghosts of countless journeys.
Then, a flicker. At the far end of the parkade, near the entrance ramp, a figure moved. Tall. Silhouette sharp against the distant glow of the streetlights filtering down. Then another. They were being boxed in. Thom cursed under his breath. He’d underestimated them. They had anticipated his move.
"Left," Jamey hissed, pointing to a service ramp that seemed to spiral deeper into the earth, narrower than the main car ramps. "Emergency exit. Goes to the underground walkway system. Old Bay-Portage Place link. We can lose them there."
It was a gamble. The underground walkway, though familiar, would be mostly deserted at this time of night. But it was also a series of confined spaces, perfect for an ambush. He hesitated for a fraction of a second, his mind racing through the options, but the approaching figures decided for him. They were moving with a chilling certainty.
"Go!" he urged, pushing her towards the ramp. Jamey didn't question, didn't argue. She sprinted, her boots echoing on the concrete, the sound unnervingly loud. Thom followed, his eyes darting, searching for any opportunity, any weakness in their pursuers' strategy.
Echoes in the Underground
The service ramp led them into a tunnel, stark white walls and a low ceiling. It was warmer here, almost stifling, the air thick with the smell of cleaning products and stale coffee. The tunnel opened into the main concourse of the underground walkway, a bright, deserted artery connecting the city's winter-bound buildings. Shops were dark, their displays eerie behind security gates. The occasional security camera, a silent, unblinking eye, felt less like a comfort and more like a threat.
"This way, I know a shortcut," Jamey panted, pulling him into a side corridor, past a closed-off fountain, its basin dry and dusty. Her tablet was still clutched in her hand, its screen a faint glow against her face.
The shortcut led them through a maze of maintenance rooms, past rattling ventilation shafts and humming electrical panels. The air grew colder, drier. They emerged into a wide, deserted corridor that smelled faintly of chlorine. A gymnasium, perhaps, or a pool, in an adjacent building.
"They're behind us," Thom stated, not a question, his voice clipped. He heard it: the faint, metallic scrape of rubber soles on polished linoleum, the rapid, shallow breaths. Two of them. Maybe more.
Jamey nodded, her face grim. "Got a visual on one of them through the camera feeds. Dark jacket, earpiece. Professional." Her fingers flew across the tablet. "There's a fire escape up ahead. Leads to the surface, near the Forks. But it's locked from the outside."
Locked. Great. He could feel the frustration bubbling, hot and useless, against the cold fear. He glanced at the data chip in his pocket. What had they found? What was so important that these people would hunt them like this, through the frozen guts of the city?
A door slammed shut somewhere behind them, echoing down the empty corridor. They were gaining. Fast. Thom grabbed Jamey's arm. "We go through. Break it."
They reached the fire escape door, a heavy steel slab with a thick deadbolt. Thom slammed his shoulder into it, once, twice, a grunt of effort escaping him. The metal shuddered, but held. His shoulder screamed in protest.
"Wait!" Jamey cried, pushing him aside. She fumbled with something in her other pocket, a small, thin metal tool. With a series of precise, almost delicate movements, she worked at the lock. A soft click. Then another. And with a final, satisfying thunk, the deadbolt retracted. She grinned, a fleeting, wild thing.
Thom barely registered it. He yanked the door open. A blast of frigid air hit them, carrying the scent of snow and damp earth. They burst out onto a narrow platform, an exterior fire escape clinging to the side of a tall, anonymous building. The city lay spread before them, a glittering expanse of streetlights and frosted rooftops. The Forks, illuminated by the distant floodlights, seemed a world away.
They scrambled down the icy metal stairs, their boots ringing on each tread. Below, a small, snow-covered lane. And just as they reached the bottom, a black SUV, sleek and silent, rounded the corner. Its headlights, harsh and blinding, swept across them. The figures from the parkade, now clearly visible, stood beside it, their faces obscured by ski masks. Their eyes, however, were not. Cold. Professional. And utterly without remorse.
Jamey fumbled with her tablet, her fingers trembling. "They’ve got the perimeter on lockdown. Every exit. How did they know?"
Thom didn’t answer. He was already looking, desperately. The alley was a dead end. The SUV blocked their escape. His gaze snagged on a barely visible grate in the snowy ground, half-obscured by a drifted pile of snow. A storm drain. Too small. Maybe. He looked at Jamey, her face pale in the reflected glare of the SUV's lights. This wasn't just mischief anymore. This was a trap. And they were caught.
His hand went to his pocket, to the cold, hard rectangle of the data chip. He had to decide. Fast. Throw it? Destroy it? Or try to keep it, to understand what information had put them in this impossible position? The chill of the Winnipeg night bit deeper, a promise of something far worse than frostbite.
The figures advanced, slow and deliberate, their hands tucked into their tactical jackets. He heard the faint click of a safety being disengaged. The world narrowed to the sound of his own frantic breathing, the rasp of the wind, and the relentless, mechanical advance of their pursuers. There was no escape. Not here. Not now. He met Jamey's terrified gaze across the small, snow-covered lane. A silent question hung between them, heavy and cold as the winter air. What had they actually found? And what was it going to cost them?
Unfinished Tales and Fun Short Stories to Read
A Chill in the Circuit is an unfinished fragment from the Unfinished Tales and Random Short Stories collection, an experimental, creative research project by The Arts Incubator Winnipeg and the Art Borups Corners Storytelling clubs. Each chapter is a unique interdisciplinary arts and narrative storytelling experiment, born from a collaboration between artists and generative AI, designed to explore the boundaries of creative writing, automation, and storytelling. The project was made possible with funding and support from the Ontario Arts Council Multi and Inter-Arts Projects program and the Government of Ontario.
By design, these stories have no beginning and no end. Many stories are fictional, but many others are not. They are snapshots from worlds that never fully exist, inviting you to imagine what comes before and what happens next. We had fun exploring this project, and hope you will too.